Hi there^^

2015-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Ho about your a day. I hope you who is very happiness person. And The last time that I drowned my sorrows was then broken up with my X girlfriend. In fact, It is my first time that I was drunk alcools....;;;

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kirk! Thanks for checking on me. My Wednesday was so toxic. How about yours? I hope you did not drown your sorrows for you simply do not have any sorrow to drown. I wish you happiness, too! Here\'s an intriguing question: Do you still see yourself being with your ex-girlfriend? Think about it deeply. And of course, do not forget about your goals this year. Thank you so much for sharing. Cheer up now Kirk! May you continue to have a great Thursday. I won\'t call you tomorrow, but I hope you can still study our lesson and speak English when you can. Stay safe! Also, good luck in your cantata! _Klein Ho about your a day. >>How about your day? >>How was your day?I hope you who is very happiness person.>>I hope you are happy.And The last time that I drowned my sorrows was then broken up with my X girlfriend.>>And the last time I drowned my sorrows was when I broke up with my girlfriend.In fact, It is my first time that I was drunk alcools....;;; >>In fact, it is my first time to drink alcohol.

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