Hi there.
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, about your require that you want to know about my travel plans, I don't have any ideas for this.
Just, I think just placese that I want to visit.
So, the plans that you want to listen is nothing...^^;;
And about today's homework...
If I will encounter like the situations, I will call the people who are able to talk with me well.
Because, even if the people have many good capabilities to accomplish the projact, They may not be able to interact with me, the project will not be succesful.
강사 첨삭
I hope you\'ll polish your itinerary soon.
Well, making strict plans for your trip won\'t be so challenging, right? This must be the reason that you don\'t have much to tell me. Well, none yet.
When you get back, I\'m expecting many wonderful stories from you. Perhaps, you can send me compositions or letters then.
I really want to go on a trip, too!
I better invite those who can put up with my bad attitude.
I was reminded of this after reading your answer to your homework. I totally agree with you!
Actually, most of the time, I agree with your ideas. Of course! Because more or less all that you say make sense.
Thank you for posting your composition again Kirk. I truly missed this!
I\'ll catch you again here later.
Until then!
_Klein
First of all, about your require that you want to know about my travel plans, I don\'t have any ideas for this.
>>First of all, about your request to know my travel plans, I don\'t have any ideas for this.Just, I think just placese that I want to visit.>>I just think of the places that I want to visit.So, the plans that you want to listen is nothing...^^;;>>So, the plans that you want to listen to is nothing.
>>So, the plans that you want to hear is nothing.And about today\'s homework...>>CorrectIf I will encounter like the situations, I will call the people who are able to talk with me well.>>If I will encounter such situation, I will call the people who are able to talk with me well.Because, even if the people have many good capabilities to accomplish the projact, They may not be able to interact with me, the project will not be succesful.
>>Correct
OR >> Because even if those people have the capability to accomplish the project but cannot interact with me, the project won\'t be successful.
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