Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon My dear.
I think you are very kindness over read your statement.^^
And I am thankful your concern.^^
thank you^^
Are you game to leave the comforts of your home to reach out to poor families in third world countries?
Expound your answer.
Yes of course.^^
Sometimes, I have sent some money for them and visited thier countries.^^
Of course, though the missionary group.^^
I think that is very good activities to not only them but also us.^^
강사 첨삭
What a pleasant surprise! It\'s nice to have you back here on the board. I\'m glad you found time to drop by.
I know that you\'re kind of busy preparing for your trip abroad and spending quality time with your love ones.
Just take it easy Kirk. I know that you can plan every thing out carefully. You even include those unfortunate ones in your plans, which is really inspiring.
I ought to thank you for always giving light to such things that really matter.
And my dear, I\'ll just catch you again on the next board. I just saw another composition from you.
Later!
_Klein
Good afternoon My dear.
>>CorrectI think you are very kindness over read your statement.^^
>>I think you are very kind when I went over or read your statement.And I am thankful your concern.^^
>>And I am thankful for your concern.thank you^^>>CorrectAre you game to leave the comforts of your home to reach out to poor families in third world countries?Expound your answer.Yes of course.^^>>Correct
Sometimes, I have sent some money for them and visited thier countries.^^>>Correct [spelling check: their]
OR >> Some time, I have sent some money to them and visited their country.Of course, though the missionary group.^^>>Correct [spelling check: through]I think that is very good activities to not only them but also us.^^
>>I think that is a very good activity not only to them but also us.>>I think that these are very good acts not only to them but also us.
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