Hi there^^

2015-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon My dear. I think you are very kindness over read your statement.^^ And I am thankful your concern.^^ thank you^^ Are you game to leave the comforts of your home to reach out to poor families in third world countries? Expound your answer. Yes of course.^^ Sometimes, I have sent some money for them and visited thier countries.^^ Of course, though the missionary group.^^ I think that is very good activities to not only them but also us.^^

강사 첨삭

What a pleasant surprise! It\'s nice to have you back here on the board. I\'m glad you found time to drop by. I know that you\'re kind of busy preparing for your trip abroad and spending quality time with your love ones. Just take it easy Kirk. I know that you can plan every thing out carefully. You even include those unfortunate ones in your plans, which is really inspiring. I ought to thank you for always giving light to such things that really matter. And my dear, I\'ll just catch you again on the next board. I just saw another composition from you. Later! _Klein Good afternoon My dear. >>CorrectI think you are very kindness over read your statement.^^ >>I think you are very kind when I went over or read your statement.And I am thankful your concern.^^ >>And I am thankful for your concern.thank you^^>>CorrectAre you game to leave the comforts of your home to reach out to poor families in third world countries?Expound your answer.Yes of course.^^>>Correct Sometimes, I have sent some money for them and visited thier countries.^^>>Correct [spelling check: their] OR >> Some time, I have sent some money to them and visited their country.Of course, though the missionary group.^^>>Correct [spelling check: through]I think that is very good activities to not only them but also us.^^ >>I think that is a very good activity not only to them but also us.>>I think that these are very good acts not only to them but also us.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·