Hi there^^
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What and who never fail to make you feel like a million bucks?
What do you do to make that person feel like a million bucks too?
My answer for your first question is "I have very many things'.^^
And there are you among these things.^^hahaha.^^
I think that the first thing is to sing a song.^^ and you are the second thing?
Because, you listen to my statements and worries always.^^
And for second question, I also listen to statements and thinking and worries of others too.^^
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Come on Kirk, I think you\'re laughing when you wrote that I am one of those that make you feel like a million bucks.
But seriously, are you stating a fact here?
I hope your answer is, \"YES\". But if it\'s \"No\", I would still accept it as long as it\'s what you really feel.
Thank you so much for making me smile today. This sure is a bit touching.
I hope you\'ll continue making everyone around you feel like a million bucks. I\'ll strive harder to make you feel like it at all times.
Are you enjoying your afternoon, so far?
Again, thank you for including this composition making activity part of it.
Keep safe Kirk!
_Klein
What and who never fail to make you feel like a million bucks?What do you do to make that person feel like a million bucks too?My answer for your first question is \"I have very many things\'.^^>>My answer to your first question is there are very many things that make me feel like a million bucks.
And there are you among these things.^^hahaha.^^
>>And you are one of these things.
>>And you are among these things.
>>And you are included.I think that the first thing is to sing a song.^^ and you are the second thing?
>>Correct
OR >>I think that the first thing is singing a song while the second is you, right?
>>I think the first thing is singing while the second is you, I guess.Because, you listen to my statements and worries always.^^>>Correct
OR >> Because you always listen to me, even to my worries.And for second question, I also listen to statements and thinking and worries of others too.^^
>>And for the second question, I also listen to the opinions and worries of others.
>>And for the second question, I listen to the opinions and worries of others, too.
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