Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening my dear.^^
I think that you are my good friend all my life.
Because, you have treated me honestly.^^
If I have not saw you, I know that.^^
Thank you.^^
And I will try to have our class in Cambodia, If I can.^^
-Homework for today-
When was the last time you did something you weren’t supposed to?
What exactly happened?
I think... It was the most unpredictable happening, that is broken up with my X-girl friend.
Honestly... I could not pridict then I may be broken up with her ..;;
So, My heart was painful...;;;
HER~~(It is just korean expression..;; Can you remember it?)^^
HER HER HER.....;;
강사 첨삭
Oh yes my dear, HER, HER, HER! You truly love \"HER\". While I love \"HIM\"! I\'m kidding!
Take me to Cambodia Kirk. I mean find time to take your class with me even when you are in Cambodia. I would likely feel that I am there, too.
That would be awesome!!!
Thank you so much for your kind words here for the nth time. I have given you many \"CORRECT\" marks. I hope you\'ll be proud of yourself.
And I also hope that Eun-Sun will make you feel whole again after your former girlfriend tear you into unimaginable pieces. I\'m so sorry, I made you recall that hurtful past again. But I know that you\'re all better now. I want you to stay happy!
Fill your heart with so much love and happiness, Kirk.
Have fun and live your life to the fullest!
Keep safe, too!
_Klein
Good evening my dear.^^I think that you are my good friend all my life.
Because, you have treated me honestly.^^>>CorrectIf I have not saw you, I know that.^^>>If I have not seen you, I would know that.
>>Though I haven\'t seen you, I know that.Thank you.^^And I will try to have our class in Cambodia, If I can.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-When was the last time you did something you weren’t supposed to?What exactly happened?I think... It was the most unpredictable happening, that is broken up with my X-girl friend.>>I think it was the most unpredictable happening that is when I broke up with my x-girlfriend/ previous or former girlfriend.Honestly... I could not pridict then I may be broken up with her ..;;>>Honestly, I did not predict that I would broke up with her.So, My heart was painful...;;;
>>So my heart was in pain.
>>So it was painful.HER~~(It is just korean expression..;;
>>HER -It is just a Korean expression.
Can you remember it?)^^HER HER HER.....;;
>>Correct!
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