Hi there^^

2015-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Good evening my dear.^^ I think that you are my good friend all my life. Because, you have treated me honestly.^^ If I have not saw you, I know that.^^ Thank you.^^ And I will try to have our class in Cambodia, If I can.^^ -Homework for today- When was the last time you did something you weren’t supposed to? What exactly happened? I think... It was the most unpredictable happening, that is broken up with my X-girl friend. Honestly... I could not pridict then I may be broken up with her ..;; So, My heart was painful...;;; HER~~(It is just korean expression..;; Can you remember it?)^^ HER HER HER.....;;

강사 첨삭

Oh yes my dear, HER, HER, HER! You truly love \"HER\". While I love \"HIM\"! I\'m kidding! Take me to Cambodia Kirk. I mean find time to take your class with me even when you are in Cambodia. I would likely feel that I am there, too. That would be awesome!!! Thank you so much for your kind words here for the nth time. I have given you many \"CORRECT\" marks. I hope you\'ll be proud of yourself. And I also hope that Eun-Sun will make you feel whole again after your former girlfriend tear you into unimaginable pieces. I\'m so sorry, I made you recall that hurtful past again. But I know that you\'re all better now. I want you to stay happy! Fill your heart with so much love and happiness, Kirk. Have fun and live your life to the fullest! Keep safe, too! _Klein Good evening my dear.^^I think that you are my good friend all my life. Because, you have treated me honestly.^^>>CorrectIf I have not saw you, I know that.^^>>If I have not seen you, I would know that. >>Though I haven\'t seen you, I know that.Thank you.^^And I will try to have our class in Cambodia, If I can.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-When was the last time you did something you weren’t supposed to?What exactly happened?I think... It was the most unpredictable happening, that is broken up with my X-girl friend.>>I think it was the most unpredictable happening that is when I broke up with my x-girlfriend/ previous or former girlfriend.Honestly... I could not pridict then I may be broken up with her ..;;>>Honestly, I did not predict that I would broke up with her.So, My heart was painful...;;; >>So my heart was in pain. >>So it was painful.HER~~(It is just korean expression..;; >>HER -It is just a Korean expression. Can you remember it?)^^HER HER HER.....;; >>Correct!

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