Hi there.^^
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I thought your statement is so helpful to during to read the feedback writen on January 12.^^
Thank you very much.^^
Have you had the courage to overcome your gall or uncouth behavior?
If yes, please relate it to me in as much detail as you can.
If not, when would you have the courage to do so?
I think I have had many behaviors that is not graceful because I am a Human.
Nevertheless, thankfully, I have overcome the behaviors through that My parents teached me.
My parents often said "If you don't want to listen and see and feel, others also like it.".
So, when I make a misstake to others, I have the thoughts that My parents said to me.
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You are the best!You never fail to make me smile and touch my heart Kirk!Thank you so much for your kind words. Honestly, I always pray that you\'d find useful and helpful everything that I share with you. I truly want to be of help to you to the best of my abilities.I even try to make the homework tricky but you know what you always give me good answers.Just like what we have here. You somehow implied how much you appreciate everything that your parents told you.I am deeply touched! We should never take for granted every single word from our parents for we must acknowledge their wisdom.You are such a good-natured person! No wonder many people love you.Stay kind my dearest friend!It\'s inevitable for you to commit mistakes for we all do but we should avoid committing the same mistake twice for we don\'t want to hurt others badly.What an inspiring answer! Now I\'m reflecting on my uncouth behavior. Oh boy, I am such a nasty person. T.T But I really try to be as kind as you. Let\'s help each other.And so Kirk, I\'ll just catch you again on the next composition board.You sent another one, so I better check it out. I know that you shared another wonderful thought of yours.Your friend,_Klein
I thought your statement is so helpful to during to read the feedback writen on January 12.^^
>>I thought your statement is so helpful when I read the feedback written on January 12.>>I thought your statement in the feedback on the 12th of January is helpful.
Thank you very much.^^
>>Correct
Have you had the courage to overcome your gall or uncouth behavior? If yes, please relate it to me in as much detail as you can.If not, when would you have the courage to do so?I think I have had many behaviors that is not graceful because I am a Human.
>>I think I have had many behaviors that are not graceful because I am human.Nevertheless, thankfully, I have overcome the behaviors through that My parents teached me.
>>Nevertheless, thankfully, I have overcome those behaviors through what my parents have taught me.My parents often said \"If you don\'t want to listen and see and feel, others also like it.\".
>>CorrectSo, when I make a misstake to others, I have the thoughts that My parents said to me.
>>Correct [spelling check: mistake]OR>> So when I commit a mistake or offend others, I am reminded of what my parents have told me.
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