hi there^^

2015-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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In what occasions do you think you come on strong? Describe each briefly. I come on strong then i am in the discussion about my major. I dont know why. any way i come on strong then.

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Oh, so this is where you come on strong Kirk. And I remember, we\'ve talked about your major many times and the reason that you\'re saying that you come on strong is because you know so much about it. Other people simply envy you, just like I do. Nonetheless, your awareness of this would enable you to tone it down and sound so much better when talking about it with others who don\'t really know you well. Remember that you are still one of the nicest people I know. I even have to thank you for making me feel that you are serious about your studies. Keep it up! Though this composition is short, it\'s very telling, which I like most. I\'ll catch you then in a while my friend. _Klein In what occasions do you think you come on strong?Describe each briefly.I come on strong then i am in the discussion about my major.>>I come on strong when I am in a discussion about my major. >>I come on strong when I am discussing my major. I dont know why. any way i come on strong then. >>Correct OR >> I don\'t know why but anyway, I come on strong.

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