Hi there.

2015-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Long time no see on the board.^^ In fact, I felt like the report during reading it. But enforcing parents are wrong at all times. Why that I think, I will tell you tomorrow our discussion.^^ Have a good night.^^ How can you defuse a potentially ugly situation? Cite examples to make your points clear At first, I do listen to the others. And second, I have some effort that I comprehend the others.^^

강사 첨삭

It sure has been a long time since you last posted on the board. Now that you\'re back in Korea, I guess we can catch up here. I\'m glad the report I shared made you think deeply. I\'ve got some more, so don\'t worry. As for your claim, I can say that you have supported it well earlier during our class. Thank you so much for always sharing your ideas with me. You also gave me an idea on how to defuse a potentially ugly situation. I really hope that we won\'t have such between us. Are you having a great afternoon, so far? Have you eaten? Always take care of yourself Kirk! I\'ll catch you again later. Please keep me posted of your whereabouts. A bunch of thanks! _Klein Long time no see on the board.^^>>CorrectIn fact, I felt like the report during reading it. >>In fact, I felt like reading a report while reading your feedback.But enforcing parents are wrong at all times.>>Correct Why that I think, I will tell you tomorrow our discussion.^^>>Why I think that way? I will tell you tomorrow during our discussion.Have a good night.^^ >>CorrectHow can you defuse a potentially ugly situation?Cite examples to make your points clearAt first, I do listen to the others.>>Correct OR >> At first, I do listen to others.And second, I have some effort that I comprehend the others.^^ >>Correct OR >> Secondly, I exert some effort to comprehend others.

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