hi there^^

2015-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Did you have a lunch? If you already did that cheer up doing your tasks, if not have a good meal for your health body.^^ I am studying in a library where is my hometown.^^ Here is very many people who have plenty of effort to bacome their dreams.^^ So i am inspired also by them. HAVE a nice afternoon.^^ ~Homework for today~ When you are melancholic, do you tend to clamp down toward others? Support your answer. When i am melancolic, i have some time to listen music or watch a good movies. In fact, i don't want to make others are uncomfortable, even if i am melancholic^^;; Is it good answer?

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Yes, I had lunch already Kirk. How about you? I had rice and chicken patties. It cheered me up but this composition of yours added delight to my heart. Thank you so much for allotting some time for this. You truly are studying hard. Carry on and reach for the stars. Dream on and reach for your dreams. Put them to life my dear. I know that you can do it! Are speaking of melancholy, when you feel melancholic, it\'s good that you don\'t tend to clamp down toward others. That\'s really good of you. I would just like you to know that if ever you would feel melancholic, you can always let it out to me and to your other friends. Remember that you are not alone and God is always looking after you. Stay kind! And to answer your final question, my answer is a big \"YES\". You ought to know that your answers are always good for me. Keep it up! Take a break once in a while, too, so you won\'t be bored of studying. Most importantly, stay safe! I\'ll catch you again later. _Klein Did you have a lunch? >>Did you have lunch?If you already did that cheer up doing your tasks, if not have a good meal for your health body.^^ >>If you already did that, cheer up while doing your tasks. If not, have a good meal for your health.I am studying in a library where is my hometown.^^ >>I am still in a library in my hometown.Here is very many people who have plenty of effort to bacome their dreams.^^ >>Here, there are many people who have plenty of effort to become their dreams. >>Here, there are many people who exert much effort to become who they are dreaming of. >>Here, there are many people who exert much effort to put their dreams to life.So i am inspired also by them. >>Correct [capitalization: I]HAVE a nice afternoon.^^>>Correct~Homework for today~When you are melancholic, do you tend to clamp down toward others?Support your answer.When i am melancolic, i have some time to listen music or watch a good movies. >>When I am melancholic, I have some time to listen to music or watch good movies.In fact, i don\'t want to make others are uncomfortable, even if i am melancholic^^;; >>In fact, I don\'t want to make other uncomfortable even if I am melancholic.Is it good answer? >>Is it a good answer? >>Is this a good answer?

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