hi there^^

2015-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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This day is good for you^^ How are you doing for this moment? I am staying a cafe because the library is closed this day. After arriveing there, i knew that.;; So now, I am in cafe in my home town. Please, i want to to have a great afternoon for yourself^^ Cheer up! ~Homework for today~ Who among your friends has a chip on his shoulder? How did you get along? I think that nobody are my friends who have chip on their shoulder. Just, In my memory, I had a predecessor who like that character in my military life. But it was hard work that i have relationship with him;;

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This day sure has become brighter! I\'m just wondering why your library is close today. Is there some kind of holiday I don\'t know of? Good thing there\'s a cafe where you can stay and grab a bite. Oh brother, cafes remind me of delicious cakes and cupcakes. Enjoy your afternoon, as well! And as for your answer to your homework, it\'s good that you are reminded of that person. I hope you can still keep in touch and catch up with him. You never know; he might be a great person, worthy to be your friend, now. Of course, this is up to you. Just enjoy every second of the day and stay safe! Thanks for checking the feedback out and doing your homework. I really love it! Catch you later Kirk. _Klein This day is good for you^^ >>CorrectHow are you doing for this moment? >>How are you doing at this moment?I am staying a cafe because the library is closed this day. >>CorrectAfter arriveing there, i knew that.;; >>Correct [spelling check: arriving] OR >> I only knew about it after arriving there.So now, I am in cafe in my home town. >>Correct [spelling check: hometown]Please, i want to to have a great afternoon for yourself^^ >>Please, I want you to have a great afternoon for yourself. >>Please have a great afternoon for yourself.Cheer up!>>Correct~Homework for today~Who among your friends has a chip on his shoulder?How did you get along?I think that nobody are my friends who have chip on their shoulder. >>I think nobody among my friends has a chip on his shoulder.Just, In my memory, I had a predecessor who like that character in my military life. >>Just in my memory, I had a predecessor who likes characters in our military life.But it was hard work that i have relationship with him;; >>But it was hard work to have a relationship with him.

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