hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
The Weather of Korea is not fine.
So rain will likely drop...
I don't hope that the rain will drop before I will go home.
Anyway^^
Do your best always and all things^^
~Homework for today~
How do you feel when others tell you that you are or you are not a chip off the old block?
Relate some of your experiences.
Sometimes, I listen to that I am a chip off the old block from the others.
Of course, I can listen to that, but I don't want to even follow the character of my parents^^
And I don't want to listen "You have characters like your parents."
강사 첨삭
Get home safely Kirk!
It\'s good that you already finished this composition. Have you eaten?
Have some snacks, too, when you get hungry.
You\'ve done your part, so you deserve a break. Well, that would be after reading this.
Actually, I haven\'t seen your dad and I only saw one picture of your mom. Why don\'t you send a family photo, so I can determine if you really are a chop off the old block? This is just my suggestion my friend.
I cannot also say that you have the same character as they have for I haven\'t really talked to them.
I just hope that you got their good looks and personality. I think this sounds much better. What do you think Kirk?
And so, having said these things, you must be a good chip off the old block.
May you continue to have a great time!
_Klein
The Weather of Korea is not fine.
>>The weather in Korea is not fine.
>>The weather here is not fine.So rain will likely drop...
>>The rain is likely to fall.
>>It seems it\'s going to rain.I don\'t hope that the rain will not drop before I will go home.
>>I hope the rain won\'t fall before I get home.
>>I hope it won\'t rain until I get home.Anyway^^Do your best always and all things^^>>Correct
OR >> Anyway, do your best in all things always.~Homework for today~How do you feel when others tell you that you are or you are not a chip off the old block?Relate some of your experiences.Sometimes, I listen to that I am a chip off the old block from the others.
>>Sometimes, I hear from others that I am a chip off the old block.
>>Sometimes, I hear that I am a chip off the old block from others.Of course, I can listen to that, but I don\'t want to even follow the character of my parents^^>>CorrectAnd I don\'t want to listen \"You have characters like your parents.\"
>>And I don\'t want to hear, \"You have the character like your parents\'.\"
>>And I don\'t want to hear that I have the same character as my parents\'.
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