Hi there^^

2015-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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This day is good for you^^ How is your condition now? And Have you kept(remained) to exercise continously? If we have life is well, we need to continue exercisin each days. If there is a swimming pool around your hometown, try to swim.! A reason that I recommend this is it is good for your body(detailedly, your lung and back Nad nees~~♡) I think it is better than walking and running~ In any case, have a good time rest day and don't forget to have a meal enough^^ Bye^^ Are you intuitive? Yes, I am.. In fact, some times,when my friends and my coworkers and my team members can't decide something, I can choose some good stuffs or selections. Maybe, I have a good intuitive ability.^^ How about you^^??

강사 첨삭

I\'m feeling so good now after reading your composition Kirk! I hope you felt the same after completing this. As for your recommendation, I really love staying in the water, but I\'m afraid I cannot swim. It sure is one of the skills that I do not have. I know that it can be learned because like you told me before, we are born swimmers. It\'s just that, my body seems to sink. I need to try harder! I need to exert much effort for this, which is as much as the effort that you exert for your English studies. I can then say that you are very intuitive. May you always come up with great ideas that can help many more people, especially your love ones. May you continue to have a great day and catch you later! Stay safe! _Klein P.S. Enjoy your English conversation class. This day is good for you^^How is your condition now? >>CorrectAnd Have you kept(remained) to exercise continously? >>And are you exercising continuously? >>And have you kept up with your exercise? >>And are you still exercising?If we have life is well, we need to continue exercisin each days. >>If we want to have a good life, we need to continue exercising each day.If there is a swimming pool around your hometown, try to swim.! >>CorrectA reason that I recommend this is it is good for your body(detailedly, your lung and back Nad nees~~♡) >>Correct [spelling check: in detail; and; knees] OR >> One reason I recommend you this is it is good for your body, especially your lungs, back and knees.I think it is better than walking and running~ >>CorrectIn any case, have a good time rest day and don\'t forget to have a meal enough^^Bye^^>>In any case, have a good resting time and don\'t forget to have enough meal.Are you intuitive?Yes, I am..>>Correct In fact, some times,when my friends and my coworkers and my team members can\'t decide something, I can choose some good stuffs or selections.>>In fact, sometimes, when my friends, my coworkers, and my teammates cannot decide on something, I can choose some good stuff or selections. Maybe, I have a good intuitive ability.^^How about you^^?? >>Correct

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