Hi there^^
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My answer was so late^^;;
So Sorry dear..
I will must answer for your feedback immediately.^^
Make a list of the memory-enhancing activities that you are engaged in.
The first one is to study English.
I Think it is best thing that my life enhance.
Now, My thought It is.
And second is exersicing.
In fact, If we are healthy, anything is not significant.
So, I think that Is important for our life.
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Please do not be too hard on yourself Kirk.
It\'s always better late than never. Besides, you even made your composition extra special. This is probably the reason you sent it a bit later than usual. Nonetheless, it\'s always a delight receiving one from you.
As for your memory-enhancing activities, they sure are very broad. This means that you engage in a lot. My advice is for you to take it easy. Find pleasure in every thing that you do. Oh wait, exercising while studying English can be fun! What do you think?
You\'ll stay healthy and you\'ll keep your mind sharp.
Just keep up with it Kirk and in no time, you\'ll be where you want to be.
Enjoy the rest of the afternoon and stay safe, as always!
_Klein
My answer was so late^^;;So Sorry dear..
>>CorrectI will must answer for your feedback immediately.^^>>I must answer your feedback immediately.
>>I will answer your feedback immediately for I must.Make a list of the memory-enhancing activities that you are engaged in.The first one is to study English.>>Correct
I Think it is best thing that my life enhance.>>I think it is the best thing for my life to be enhanced.
>>I think it is the best thing to enhance my life.Now, My thought It is.
>>Now, this is my thought.And second is exersicing.
>>Correct [spelling check: exercising]In fact, If we are healthy, anything is not significant.>>Correct
OR >> In fact, if we are healthy, everything else is insignificant.So, I think that Is important for our life.
>>Correct
OR >> So I think that is important in our life.
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