Hi^^ there~

2015-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I think that the rainy season was started within Korea recently. So, Thesedays, the atmosphere are so humid.ㅠㅠ; How is weather in your country? I predict that the weather in the Philippine is same my country. Please, take care of yourslef my dear. And I agree your opinion you wrote down on the board. You are my good teacher and adviser.^^ I am thankful for your every effort.^^ Have a good night.^^ From your dear Kirk.~~ -Homework for today- What are you usually caught short of? I know that I need to express My thoughts in English. For this, I must need to have better grammar skills and memorising vocabularies. I think those are my caught short things.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear Kirk, Now I am caught short of compliments for your composition today. This is really good! The thought is there and you made good ones. I only provided a few recommendations that would make them sound natural. I hope you\'ll find them useful in your succeeding compositions. I can say that you must be right with the weather here and there. Better stay safe and sound!!! I ought to thank you for your effort as well. I will do the best I can to help you improve your skills. Let\'s work together! We can do it! Enjoy the rest of the day Kirk. Let\'s grab a bite later. _Klein I think that the rainy season was started within Korea recently. >>I think that the rainy season started in Korea recently.So, Thesedays, the atmosphere are so humid.ㅠㅠ; >>So these days, the atmosphere is so humid.How is weather in your country? >>How is the weather in your country?I predict that the weather in the Philippine is same my country. >>I predict that the weather in the Philippines is the same in my country.Please, take care of yourslef my dear. >>Correct [spelling check: yourself]And I agree your opinion you wrote down on the board. >>And I agree with the opinion you wrote down on the board.You are my good teacher and adviser.^^ I am thankful for your every effort.^^Have a good night.^^From your dear Kirk.~~>>Correct-Homework for today-What are you usually caught short of?I know that I need to express My thoughts in English. >>CorrectFor this, I must need to have better grammar skills and memorising vocabularies. >>For this, I must have better grammar skills and memorize vocabularies. >>For this, I need to have better grammar skills and memorize vocabularies.I think those are my caught short things. >>I think these are the things that I am caught short of.

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