Hi there.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.^^
It is a day that we can go to picnic.
Because, the weather in Korea is so cool.^^
Of course, rain was dropped this morning and now is mild cloudy in Korea, Now It is so cool that in Korea.
If the weatehr in Philippines will be nice this evening, to go to the outside may be good.^^
Have a night eveing.^^
When was the last time you caught someone red-handed?
Please relate what happened.
In fact, I don't have any experiences that I caught someone red-handed...
If I saw something, I might announce this situation to a police office.
강사 첨삭
Let\'s go on a picnic now, Kirk!
What would you be preparing? I can prepare some sandwiches.
I use to go on picnics with my family, so I miss those days. How about you? Maybe it\'s time to introduce Eun-Sun to your parents. Go on a picnic! What do you think? Please think about it deeply.
And speaking of going out, yes, I went out with some of my high school friends. They\'ve grown so tall and left me behind. I\'m like the shortest.
Oh well, that\'s life!
And as for your answer to your homework, I guess I would do the same. It sure is the best thing to do, so we won\'t get into so much trouble, right?
Thank you so much for sharing a piece of what you have on mind again on the board.
You know that I am always pleased to receive a message from you. Keep up with your practice!
And of course, may you enjoy this Thursday. Go out with your good friends, too.
Catch you later!
_Klein
Hi there.^^
>>CorrectIt is a day that we can go to picnic.
>>It is a day that we can go on a picnic.Because, the weather in Korea is so cool.^^
>>Correct
OR >> It\'s because the weather in Korea is so cool.
[It\'s good to go on a picnic because the weather in Korea is so cool.]Of course, rain was dropped this morning and now is mild cloudy in Korea,
>>Of course, rain fell this morning and now it\'s mildly cloudy in Korea.
Now It is so cool that in Korea.
>>Now it is so cool in Korea.If the weatehr in Philippines will be nice this evening, to go to the outside may be good.^^
>>If the weather in the Philippines will be nice this evening, going outside may be good.Have a night eveing.^^>>Have a nice evening.
>>Have a good night!When was the last time you caught someone red-handed?Please relate what happened.In fact, I don\'t have any experiences that I caught someone red-handed..
>>CorrectIf I saw something, I might announce this situation to a police office.
>>Correct
OR >> If I same something, I might report this situation to the police.
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