Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there^^
This is good afternoon for me, even if The weather is cloudy here.
How do you work for today dear?
I am being crazy now, because of English speaking and writing...;;
After I checked my compositions, finally I can find that it is wrong..;;
Perhaps, If I find it is wrong, It is good for me.
Beacuse, I can't find almost that I made worng sentencese.
Please save me...ㅠㅠ;
Anyway.. Do you know How I hope you who is happy?^^
Take care of yourself dear.^^/
From kirk.
-Homework for today-
What parts of English can you easily catch on?
How about those that you find hard to catch on?
The part Of ease for me may be listening.
Because, It is to do many times that I have connected, more than other parts.
And the worst of my capability in the skills is speaking.
I think It is hard for me every time(always).
강사 첨삭
Come on Kirk! Make use of your craziness to your advantage. Speak English as often as you can even with the people at the restaurant. I know that you can do it. And of course, write anything that you want and send it to me. That\'s a better kind of being crazy. I do the same, sometimes, even with my friends. You can do it! You will soon find it easy to speak up. You always listen to me. You always obey me. You prioritize your English studies. And so Kirk, having said all of these, having used the words that you want to use, I know that you can be better. Just be patient my dear and your hard work will pay off soon.
Have a safe afternoon and oh yes, have fun with Eun-Sun!! I hope next time I can join you both.
Until then!
_Klein
Hi there^^
>>CorrectThis is good afternoon for me, even if The weather is cloudy here.
>>This is a good afternoon for me, even if the weather is cloudy here.How do you work for today dear?
>>How\'s work today dear?I am being crazy now, because of English speaking and writing...;;
>>Correct
OR >> I\'m getting crazy because of English speaking and writing.After I checked my compositions, finally I can find that it is wrong..;;
>>Correct
OR >> After checking my compositions, I finally found some parts that are wrong.Perhaps, If I find it is wrong, It is good for me.
>>Correct
OR >> Perhaps, if I know that it is wrong, I can correct it.Beacuse, I can\'t find almost that I made worng sentencese.
>>This is because I can\'t find almost all the wrong sentences that I made.
>>This is because I don\'t notice myself making inappropriate sentences.Please save me...ㅠㅠ;
>>CorrectAnyway.. Do you know How I hope you who is happy?^^
>>Anyway, do you know that I always hope you are happy?Take care of yourself dear.^^/From kirk.>>Correct [capitalization: proper noun - Kirk]-Homework for today-What parts of English can you easily catch on?How about those that you find hard to catch on?The part Of ease for me may be listening.
>>CorrectBecause, It is to do many times that I have connected, more than other parts.>>Because, I do it many times. I have communicated with many people in many parts of the world.
And the worst of my capability in the skills is speaking.
>>Correct
OR >> And the worst skill that I have is speaking.
>> And my worst English communication skill is speaking.I think It is hard for me every time(always).
>>Correct
OR >> I think it is always hard for me.
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