Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I read your message just a few minuates ago.
So, I will call them to change my class time.^^
Thank you for your favor.^^
And actually, I make a new group to study more with my class mate.
He is nine years younger than me.^^
But he has a good English skills and idioms much more than me.^^
So, I could learn conversation skills from him.^^
It is a good for me.
Of course, he does not speak English very well, but I think it is not problem because we need just people who can comunicate in English.^^
Do you agree with my opinon?^^
Actually, I think the best way to speak and listen English is just having much more time to talk in English, Isn't it??.^^
Any way, I am thankful your kindness and I want you to have great evening.^^
See you.^^
-Homework for today-
Who would you call if you’re in a can of worms right now?
Explain your choice.
If I may put like these situations, I will call my father.
Even if, I hate him, he is my best adviser and counselor.
강사 첨삭
Thank you, too, Kirk for showing your willingness to have a longer class. I hope that your request will be granted. I cannot wait to speak with you for many more minutes. Actually, if I can speak with you for hours, I would! It\'s also good if you can invite me to your group. It would be so much fun talking to many people, practicing English. Having said this, I totally agree with your opinion that you only need to communicate with someone who can speak English, though he\'s not very good at it. Besides, it\'s part of your practice. Keep that up and tell me how your discussions will go.
I hope to meet your friend, too, someday. Enjoy your chats!
And as for your answer to your homework, I\'m glad you made the right choice. I know how much you appreciate your father despite the partial feeling of annoyance due to his being too authoritative. Just be easy on him. Also, send my regards to him and to you mom.
Have a wonderful Tuesday and yes, I had a great evening. Thank you for always wishing me well Kirk.
All the best,
_Klein
I read your message just a few minuates ago.>>Correct [spelling check: minutes]So, I will call them to change my class time.^^Thank you for your favor.^^>>CorrectAnd actually, I make a new group to study more with my class mate.>>And actually, I made a new group to study more with my classmate.He is nine years younger than me.^^>>CorrectBut he has a good English skills and idioms much more than me.^^>>But he has good English skills and knows more idioms than me.So, I could learn conversation skills from him.^^>>CorrectIt is a good for me.>>It is good for me.Of course, he does not speak English very well, but I think it is not problem because we need just people who can comunicate in English.^^>>Of course, he does not speak English very well but I think it is not a problem because we just need people who can communicate in English.Do you agree with my opinon?^^>>CorrectActually, I think the best way to speak and listen English is just having much more time to talk in English, Isn\'t it??.^^>>CorrectAny way, I am thankful your kindness and I want you to have great evening.^^>>Anyway, I am thankful for your kindness and I want you to have a great evening.See you.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-Who would you call if you’re in a can of worms right now?Explain your choice.If I may put like these situations, I will call my father.>>If I may be put in this situation, I will call my father.
>>If I may be put in these situations, I will call my father.Even if, I hate him, he is my best adviser and counselor.
>>Even though I hate him, he is my best adviser and counselor.
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