Hi there^^

2015-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I think I may be growing up everyday, through the communicating with my classmates. I think It is very useful, If I can not make perfect statements. Actually, I am trying to make a English communication club that is started after our regular class everyday bigger than now. So, I have be extending this gathering from last friday. Of course, It is very disordered and messy, because they are just beginners.(all the peole)^^ If this meeting will be improved anyday, I will tell you about it.^^ Bye(^^)/ What are you likely to do with someone who is extremely snotty? Be creative but equally realistic with your answer. In fact, I am not able to be with the person just a few minutes...;; I might hit him, If I am in the situation.;;

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You really never fail to keep me posted, which I love. Thank you so much Kirk! I would also encourage your new-found friends to keep on writing in English, just like what you do. Tell them that it is a good practice. I know that you would agree with me on this one. If there\'s anything I can do to help, just let me know. I certainly want to be part of your growing English communication club. It\'s brilliant of you to make one! Honestly, I don\'t have the courage to do so, so I am really happy for you. I\'ll support you all the way my friend! I just hope that no one in your club is snotty. Well, you already wrote down that you won\'t be able to stand being with that kind of person, so I guess the members are all friendly and nice. May you have many more peers to speak with in English. Keep it up Kirk! And of course, many you have a great midweek. I\'ll catch you in a while! _Klein I think I may be growing up everyday, through the communicating with my classmates. >>I think I may be improving everyday, through communicating with my classmates. >>I think I may be improving every day, through communicating with my classmates.I think It is very useful, If I can not make perfect statements. >>Correct OR >> I think it is very useful even though I don\'t make perfect statements all the time.Actually, I am trying to make a English communication club that is started after our regular class everyday bigger than now. >>Actually, I made an English communication club. Our session starts after our regular class and it is getting bigger everyday. >>Actually, I made an English communication club, which session starts after our regular class, and it gets bigger every day.So, I have be extending this gathering from last friday. >>So, I have been extending this gathering. >>So I extended our session since last Friday.Of course, It is very disordered and messy, because they are just beginners.(all the peole)^^>>Correct OR >> Of course, it is still very messy because all the members are beginners. If this meeting will be improved anyday, I will tell you about it.^^Bye(^^)/>>Correct!What are you likely to do with someone who is extremely snotty?Be creative but equally realistic with your answer.In fact, I am not able to be with the person just a few minutes...;; >>Correct OR >> In fact, I can\'t stand being with this kind of person.I might hit him, If I am in the situation.;; >>Correct OR >> I might hit him if I am in that situation. >> I might hit him if he is extremely snotty.

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