Hi there^^

2015-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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It is so nice day to go out side in Korea. Actually, here is a little cloudy, but atmosphere in Korea is so cool (Of course, being a little humid.) Anyway, I had a good gathering with my classmate in this morning, of course I talked with just a member. Actually, I think it is most important to talk with anyone, If there are a few talkers. So today, our conversation was so nice. And I will ask you to help for our gathering. Thank you so much dear. Have a good afternoon. -Homework for today- Do you like it when you call the shots? Why do you say so? It is very difficult question to asnwer. But just tell you about my opinions... Almost all people around the world are want to stand above the others. I am a person like them... So If any chance will be given me I will grab(or get) it. But, I know taht to call the shots, I am already prepared more than the others.^^ Actually, I want to stand above the others and I want to call the shots the others.^^ But, It is not character of a dictator.^^

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Hello, Kirk! I guess this time we are not under the same sky. The weather here is still crazy! It\'s been raining for many days. I have no idea when it\'s going to stop. Nonetheless, I\'m happy because there are many activities that keep me busy, such as checking your composition. Thank you so much for keeping me company through your composition. You probably didn\'t mean to do it but it\'s the effect on me. Regarding your club, please do not hesitate to tell me what I can do to help you and the other members. Again, thank you for allowing me to be part of it. I know that I won\'t be able to contribute much because I\'m miles away, but I will still do my best to give you a hand.You call the shots, so I\'ll have to submit myself to you on this matter. You\'re not like a dictator, so it would be great to work with you.Having said this, grab all the chances there are for you to call the shots my dear. You can do it! You have my full support.I cannot wait to speak with you again.Please wait for my call!Always,_Klein It is so nice day to go out side in Korea. >>It is a very nice day to go outside here in Korea.>>It is so nice to go out in Korea. Actually, here is a little cloudy, but atmosphere in Korea is so cool >>Actually, here, it is a little cloudy but the air is so cool.>>Actually, it is a little cloudy here in Korea but it is so cool. (Of course, being a little humid.) >>Correct!OR >> Of course, it\'s still a little humid. Anyway, I had a good gathering with my classmate in this morning, of course I talked with just a member. >>Anyway, I had a good gathering with my classmate this morning. Of course, I talked with just one member. Actually, I think it is most important to talk with anyone, If there are a few talkers. >>Actually, I think it is most important to talk with anyone, even with a few people. So today, our conversation was so nice.And I will ask you to help for our gathering.Thank you so much dear.Have a good afternoon. >>Correct! -Homework for today-Do you like it when you call the shots?Why do you say so?It is very difficult question to asnwer. >>It is a very difficult question to answer. But just tell you about my opinions. >>But I will just tell you my opinions. Almost all people around the world are want to stand above the others. >>Almost all people in the world want to stand above others. I am a person like them... So If any chance will be given me I will grab(or get) it. >>I am like them, so if I will be given the chance, I will grab it. But, I know taht to call the shots, I am already prepared more than the others.^^ >>But I know that to call the shots, I should already be prepared more than the others. Actually, I want to stand above the others and I want to call the shots the others.^^ >>Actually, I want to stand above others and call the shots. But, It is not character of a dictator.^^ >>But it is not a character of a dictator.>>But not like a dictator.

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