Hi there^^

2015-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How is your own afternoon now? Today, the weather here is so nice better than yesterday! Here, It is very fine, just being a little cloud in the sky. So, I want to go outside with my girlfriend, but it is imposible because she is in the office now. If you are being in Korea, I might go outside with you~ Actually, I like to tlak with you because I am so happy then.^^ Talking with you is so fun.(not funny.^^) Now I am reading your yesterday feedback and I found a thing that I do not use "a" at all times.(it is singular). So, I will consider to use "a" in all my statements everyday. I promise. Anyway, thesedays, I am so fun to speak my opinions in English. It is so fun to talk with my classmates as talking with you. And a new member who was mentioned by me yesterday joined the party. As my expectation, She is a nice English talker. So today, the gatherng was so fun. -Homework- I can discipline nobody, because a human has an original character each one. So I just listen and comprehend them

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Oh Kirk, how can you be so sweet?! Thank you so much for always checking on me. I hope I can also do that. It\'s like, I\'ll be checking on you every hour of the day. How does that sound? I guess that\'s too much! LOL How about thrice a day - in the morning, in the afternoon, and in the evening? But of course, I know that this is quite impossible. And so, I\'ll just check on you whenever I can! Is that okay?As for your plan to go outside with your beautiful girlfriend, don\'t worry my dear for you may do that this coming weekend. I bet you have so many special activities in store for her. She will be so pleased!  Oh, how I wish I can meet both of you. You\'re such a lovely couple!!! Treasure your relationship and make it last. And don\'t forget that you ought to invite me on your wedding day. Come on! Please! LOLI\'m really glad that you have fun talking to me. Well, it\'s also partly funny. What do you think?I just think that you\'re having so much more fun talking with your new friends. I\'m kind of jealous! LOL But since that is for your own good, I will support you. Keep it up my friend!May you always have fun expressing yourself in English. Speak English as often as you can. And as for your answer to the homework, you made your point clear again. I can never agree more. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here once more. Never ever get tired of doing so, Kirk.You know how much I love checking this out. I\'ll catch you again!In the meantime, I\'ll bid you goodbye here.Later!_Klein How is your own afternoon now?Today, the weather here is so nice better than yesterday! >>Correct!Here, It is very fine, just being a little cloud in the sky. >>Here, it is very fine, just a few small clouds in the sky.So, I want to go outside with my girlfriend, but it is imposible because she is in the office now. >>Correct [spelling check: impossible]If you are being in Korea, I might go outside with you~ >>If you are in Korea, I might go outside with you.Actually, I like to tlak with you because I am so happy then.^^Talking with you is so fun.(not funny.^^) >>Correct [spelling check: talk]Now I am reading your yesterday feedback and I found a thing that I do not use \"a\" at all times.(it is singular). So, I will consider to use \"a\" in all my statements everyday. I promise. >>Correct! [a/an - for indefinite objects; the - for specific ones]Anyway, thesedays, I am so fun to speak my opinions in English. >>Anyway, these days, I have so much fun expressing my opinions in English.It is so fun to talk with my classmates as talking with you. And a new member who was mentioned by me yesterday joined the party. >>CorrectAs my expectation, She is a nice English talker. >>As I expected, she is a very nice English speaker.So today, the gatherng was so fun. >>Correct [spelling check: gathering]-Homework-I can discipline nobody, because a human has an original character each one. >>I can discipline nobody because each human has an original character.So I just listen and comprehend them >>CorrectOR >> So I just listen to them and understand their being.

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