Hi there^^

2015-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I apologize for my reply is so late... But, I already read yours when our last class finished immediately. And, I agree with your opinion, beacuse It is better than to study some materials that is translted in English. So, I had a gathering to converse after my other class with my class mate.^^ I think It is most useful way to study English.^^ Anyway, Thank you for you advisement. -Homework for today- Have you been called on the carpet for being insolent? Have you called someone on the carpet for his/her insolence? Occasionally. I had been called by my father or teachers or some people who is elder than me. But, It were just situations when I was youth. And, Very long time ago, when I was university student, I called on the carpet my juniors in university.^^;; It were just childish behaviors.;;;

강사 첨삭

Good morning Kirk! I did not break my promise! Upon arriving in the office, I immediately checked this composition of yours. Please review my recommendations below my dear. I\'ll be checking the next one, so I\'ll catch you again there! Don\'t be insolent now Kirk. And come on, your reply may be late but there\'s a saying that it\'s better late than never, so please do not be too hard on yourself. Bye for now! _Klein I apologize for my reply is so late...But, I already read yours when our last class finished immediately. >>CorrectAnd, I agree with your opinion, beacuse It is better than to study some materials that is translted in English. >>And I agree with your opinion, because it is better than to study some materials that are translated in English.So, I had a gathering to converse after my other class with my class mate.^^ >>Correct [one word: classmate]I think It is most useful way to study English.^^>>I think it is the most useful way to study English. Anyway, Thank you for you advisement.>>Anyway, thank you for your advice.-Homework for today-Have you been called on the carpet for being insolent?Have you called someone on the carpet for his/her insolence?Occasionally. I had been called by my father or teachers or some people who is elder than me. >>Occasionally, I had been called by my father, teachers, and other people who are older than me insolent.But, It were just situations when I was youth.>>But those were just situations when I was young.And, Very long time ago, when I was university student, I called on the carpet my juniors in university.^^;;>>And very long time ago, when I was a university student, I called my juniors on the carpet.It were just childish behaviors.;;; >>Those were childish behaviors.

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