HI there^^

2015-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

I remember how we can get something in a store, in our class today. I think It is very simple because it is just our life.^^ Even if it is hard work that i say in English, It is just our simple lifestyle. While I tell you about it, I can make a plan that I will buy anything.^^ Is it so fun?^^ Because, It is just our lifestyle, but I can explain hardly you these things in English.;; I might improve my English skills!! Anyway, have a good afternoon dear.^^ -Homework for today- What are your reasons for calling your work quits? Actually, I wanted to have better experience than that I get in my working place. So, I was called my work quits. Honestly sometime, I miss then, but I think I chose well because, while I was called my work quits, I could get much more good experience.^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kirk! Talking about light matters sure enables us to speak more and helps us improve our English communication skills more. You had a bit of a hard time but that\'s just normal. Just be patient for your hard work would soon give us good results. Now what are you planning to buy? Make sure that it is food my dear. I love eating, so this happened to me. Well, stay safe Kirk and I hope that you\'ll soon get to experience the ones that you are yearning for. Actually, I think you\'ve gained so many friends in your previous workplace and come to think of it, you met Eun-sun because of them! That\'s fate! Thank for dropping by the board and truly completing my day. It\'s a wrap for today. I\'ll catch you again later my friend! _Klein I remember how we can get something in a store, in our class today. I think It is very simple because it is just our life.^^ >>CorrectEven if it is hard work that i say in English, It is just our simple lifestyle. >>Correct [capitalization: I] OR >> Even if I find it hard to say in English, it is just our simple lifestyle.While I tell you about it, I can make a plan that I will buy anything.^^ Is it so fun?^^ >>CorrectBecause, It is just our lifestyle, but I can explain hardly you these things in English.;; >>Correct OR >> Because it is just our lifestyle, but I can hardly explain to you these things in English.I might improve my English skills!! Anyway, have a good afternoon dear.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-What are your reasons for calling your work quits?Actually, I wanted to have better experience than that I get in my working place. >>Actually, I wanted to have a better experience than the one that I got from my previous working place.So, I was called my work quits. >>So, I called my work quits.Honestly sometime, I miss then, but I think I chose well because, while I was called my work quits, I could get much more good experience.^^ >>Honestly, sometimes, I miss them, but I think I chose well because as I called my work quits, I could get a better experience.

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