Hi there^^
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How do you feel now?
I feel obnoxious now because of the condition of weather here..
here is very humid.
so I am in a cafe and I do not go home until now.
But now, I may go home because people around of me are making a noise now.
The atmosphere of this cafe is very disordered.;;
Anyway, now I have finished to read of yours.
And I think like yours, because the speaking skill that I can keep on is most important thing.
I may noy know properly that I understood all yours,
If it is right, I agree with your idea.
Finally, please take care of yourself dear.
because, it is my real pleasure.
Have a good evening.^^
-Homework for today-
For your asking, I don't have any experiences that I encounter some of obnoxious animals yet.
If I may encounter these things, I will run away from thsee things.ㅠㅠ;;
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Kirk! I\'m feeling so much better. How about you?
The weather there must be obnoxious because it shows in your composition. You\'re kind of grumpy now. Please relax my dear. Take deep breaths.
Go to a cozy place, which I think is home.
Please take good care of yourself, as well.
I hope you won\'t encounter anything obnoxious on your way.
Thank you for agreeing with me once more. Like I mentioned in the feedback, EXPRESS YOURSELF; SAY WHAT YOU WANT! I am all ears.
I cannot wait to catch up with you again. Please wait for my call on our next class.
Until then!
_Klein
How do you feel now?
>>CorrectI feel obnoxious now because of the condition of weather here..
>>Correct
OR >> I feel obnoxious now because of the weather condition.here is very humid.
>>Here, it is very humid.so I am in a cafe and I do not go home until now.
>>So I am in a cafe and I haven\'t gone home until now.But now, I may go home because people around of me are making a noise now.
>>But now, I may go home because the people around me are making noise.The atmosphere of this cafe is very disordered.;;
>>The atmosphere in this cafe is very disordered.
>>The atmosphere in this cafe is chaotic.Anyway, now I have finished to read of yours.
>>Anyway, now I have finished reading yours.
>>Anyway, now I have finished reading your feedback.And I think like yours, because the speaking skill that I can keep on is most important thing.
>>And I think like you because the speaking skill that I can keep on is the most important thing.
>>And we think alike because the speaking skill that I can keep on is most important.I may noy know properly that I understood all yours,
>>I may not know if I understood all properly or not.
>>I may not know if I understood it completely or not.If it is right, I agree with your idea.
Finally, please take care of yourself dear.
because, it is my real pleasure.
Have a good evening.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-For your asking, I don\'t have any experiences that I encounter some of obnoxious animals yet.
>>For your question, I don\'t have any experiences where I encountered some obnoxious animals yet.If I may encounter these things, I will run away from thsee things.ㅠㅠ;;
>>Correct
OR >> If I may encounter these things, I will run away from them.
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