Hi there^^

2015-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I had done to speak in front of my classmates because of your effort. But I felt I am not perfact to speak English yet. Actually, not only me but also the other speakers had get a speech in the speech contest. Of course, We had each topic is different. Anyway, they had a good speaking skill in english. So, I was inspired by them. I think It is good for me.^^ Wnyway, Thank you for your help dear.^^ Who do you want to bury the hatchet with? Please explain your answer. I want to bury the hatchet with my father. Because, we have lived with to not comprehend each one. So, now I want to comprehend each one.^^ Please tell me a good way for comprehending each other.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kirk! What a relief! And I\'m sure you are ready for the next speech. I hope you\'ll prepare more for that. This time, you procrastinated. But I know that you gave it your best shot earlier, so a round of applause for you. How I wish I was there to witness it. I totally forgot to tell you to record it for me. Nonetheless, there\'s always next time. Whatever you weren\'t able to do, do it then soon. Redeem yourself, so you won\'t feel bad about it. And for those people who have inspired you, please extend my regards to them. Last, but not the least, regarding your hope to bury the hatchet with your father, I would advise you to sit down with him, talk man to man, just keep it light of course, and the rest will follow. Maybe you can ask your dad to go out with you for lunch, snacks, or dinner. Come on, don\'t be shy! I\'m here to cheer you on. YOU CAN DO IT! And please do not forget to send my regards to your parents, also to Eun-Sun. Thanks for keeping me posted. Stay safe Kirk! _Klein I had done to speak in front of my classmates because of your effort. >>I am done speaking in front of my classmates because of your effort. >>I have spoken in front of my classmates because of your effort.But I felt I am not perfact to speak English yet. >>But I felt my English is not yet perfect. >>But I felt I don\'t speak English perfectly yet.Actually, not only me but also the other speakers had get a speech in the speech contest. >>Actually, not only me but also the other speakers who got to take part in the speech contest. >>Actually, not only me but also the other speaker who got to speak in the speech contest.Of course, We had each topic is different. >>Of course, we had our own topic. >>Of course, each of our topics is different.Anyway, they had a good speaking skill in english. >>Correct [proper noun: English] OR >> Anyway, they have a good English speaking skill.So, I was inspired by them. I think It is good for me.^^ Wnyway, Thank you for your help dear.^^>>Correct [spelling check: anyway]Who do you want to bury the hatchet with?Please explain your answer.I want to bury the hatchet with my father. >>CorrectBecause, we have lived with to not comprehend each one. >>Because we have lived together, not comprehending (understanding) each other.So, now I want to comprehend each one.^^>>So now, I want us to understand each other.Please tell me a good way for comprehending each other. >>Please tell me a good way for comprehending my father. >>Please tell me a good way on how my father and I understand each other.

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