Hi there^^

2015-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ What were your schedules Last weekend? My schedules were helping my father's tasks and meeting my girlfriend. I want you had a good meeting with your friends.^^ Answer the following questions in as much detail as you can. What are the things that bug you today? What are you going to do about them? Sometimes, studying English annoy me because I can speak English no well.. But, It inspire me always because It is not easy to learn.^^ Actually, something that is easy to learn, It does not make me to try harder. So, It is enjoyable work.^^

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Good afternoon Kirk! Now you are in the zone. How many compositions are you sending today? Well, as for my schedule last weekend, it was not hectic. On Saturday, I had an appointment with two elementary school students. But it was canceled because it\'s nearly their exams, so they needed to stay in school. On Sunday, I met my four female friends namely Jela, Len, and Aya after church. We had tea, just like I told you earlier. There was heavy rain in the afternoon but it did not stop us from meeting each other. Actually, Aya just had her blind date the day before we met, so she shared her experience with us. And of course, we shared some other stories, some about business and the like. I am glad that you did not waste your weekend. I can say that it so fruitful because you helped your father out and you met Eun-sun. How I wish you could have studied English, too. Nonetheless, at least you are keeping up with it. Maybe soon, English won\'t annoy you anymore. Let\'s study harder then! Oh, I\'ll catch you on the next feedback board. _Klein Hi there^^What were your schedules Last weekend? >>CorrectMy schedules were helping my father\'s tasks and meeting my girlfriend. >>My schedules were helping with my father\'s tasks and meeting my girlfriend.I want you had a good meeting with your friends.^^>>I want you to have a good meeting with your friends.Answer the following questions in as much detail as you can.What are the things that bug you today?What are you going to do about them?Sometimes, studying English annoy me because I can speak English no well.. >>Sometimes, studying English annoys me because I cannot speak English well.But, It inspire me always because It is not easy to learn.^^>>But I inspire myself always because it is not easy to learn.Actually, something that is easy to learn, It does not make me to try harder. >>Actually, for something that is easy to learn, it does not make me try harder. >>Actually, if something is easy to learn, it does not push me to try harder.So, It is enjoyable work.^^ >>Correct!

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