Hi there^^
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-Homework for today-
When was the last time you got carried away?
Please relate what happened in as much detail as you can.
I think one thing that I carried away was passion for my X-girl friend.
I think It was most passionate work in my life.
Sadly, I can't do passionate something for my girl friend more than X-girlfriend because it may be first love.
Anyway, then I was much passionate person.^^
How about you.
Tell me about your experience as much detail as you can.^^
강사 첨삭
Oh brother, you haven\'t completely gotten over her!
Actually, in many of my questions, you never fail to include her. It left such a huge impact on you. I totally understand. At least now, you are happy with Eun-sun. You will soon get over your first love! Let\'s put it this way. She\'s your first love and they say that first love never dies but it\'s just a state of the mind. These days, it\'s fate that brought you to where you are now coupled with your choices that you have to live by. I hope I am making sense here because I haven\'t really experienced such.
Nonetheless, I know that you can be more passionate than ever my friend!
How about your passion for English? I think that\'s quite intense. I can feel it.
And speaking of getting carried away, I sure am being carried away again here. I want to share more but I don\'t think it is right to write a long composition here. Besides, this is your board, so you should own it. Well, Kirk, thank you so much for always sharing how you feel and what you have on mind. I cannot wait to speak with you again.
In the meantime, stay safe and I\'ll tell you more about the things that got me carried away on our next class in as much detail as I can.
Catch you then!
_Klein
-Homework for today-When was the last time you got carried away?Please relate what happened in as much detail as you can.I think one thing that I carried away was passion for my X-girl friend.
>>I think one thing that got me carried away was passion for my ex-girlfriend.I think It was most passionate work in my life.
>>I think I\'ve had the most passion in my life.
>>I think I was most passionate that time in my life.Sadly, I can\'t do passionate something for my girl friend more than X-girlfriend because it may be first love.>>Sadly, I can\'t give more passion for my girlfriend now than my ex because she\'s my first love.Anyway, then I was much passionate person.^^>>Anyway, I was a very passionate person then.How about you.>>How about you?Tell me about your experience as much detail as you can.^^
>>Tell me about your experience in as much detail as you can.
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