Hi there.^^

2015-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I want you had a good day.^^/ Recently, I am a little busy because of my tasks. If I can't answer your messages, please don't be disappointed because I have checked all your messages.^^/ See you tomorrow.^^ -Homework for today- Break the news in an essay! If you don’t mind, tell me something surprising that recently happened to you. Actually, nothing surprised happened to me. Recently, my life is so boring..;;

강사 첨삭

I try to make my day as good as ever, Kirk. How about you? Thank you so much for finding time for your composition writing task. Honestly, I also hope that your day will always be good. This is why in our class, I want to check on you. You never fail to check on me, too, so I am deeply moved. Thank you for giving me the assurance that you also read all of my messages. They all come from my heart, so please put them to heart. Make every second memorable my friend! There must be something surprising that will happen later, in a very good way. Catch you then! _Klein I want you had a good day.^^/ >>I want you to have a good day. >>I hope you had a good day.Recently, I am a little busy because of my tasks. >>CorrectIf I can\'t answer your messages, please don\'t be disappointed because I have checked all your messages.^^/ See you tomorrow.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-Break the news in an essay!If you don’t mind, tell me something surprising that recently happened to you.Actually, nothing surprised happened to me. >>Actually, nothing surprising happened to me. >>Actually, nothing surprising has happened to me.Recently, my life is so boring..;; >>Correct

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