Hi there^^

2015-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Klein. Are you working now? I am preparing to go to the institute now. And I am afrid that I haven't completed my speech for the class today..;; Anyway, I will do that my best because I have prepared to do my best.^^ Please, cheering me up.!!^^ Have a nice day.^^ -Homework for today- How do you break the ice with a client? Answer this question in as much detail as you can. You may provide a dialogue if necessary. Relate your experiences, too. Actually, I haven't often met client yet becasue I am not a business man yet. But, I can explain about the way to deal with a cleint because I have seen very many times that my father dealt with many clients. My father can deal with his clients wisely, It is just smiling in front of the clients while he deal with clients. I think it is very effective skill becasue common people can't be angry or saying "no thank you" in this situation. So sometimes, my father make a good results because of the way.^^

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I\'m still working. How about you Kirk? I will keep on cheering you on and up! You and your family are always in my prayers, too. You know what Kirk when you give it your all, you won\'t have much regret. And just like how your father does it, please smile! It will brighten up the mood, make you feel better, and can make all other things seem fine. I hope you are smiling now my friend. Thank you so much for answering your homework right after our class. You are managing your time wisely now. May you continue to have a great day. Always flash a smile on your face! I want to see that too. I\'ll catch you then later! _Klein Klein. Are you working now? I am preparing to go to the institute now.And I am afrid that I haven\'t completed my speech for the class today..;; >>Correct [spelling check: afraid]Anyway, I will do that my best because I have prepared to do my best.^^ >>Anyway, I will do my best in the delivery because I have prepared the best I can. >>Anyway, I will do my best because I have prepared what I can to the best of my ability.Please, cheering me up.!!^^>>Please cheer me up. >>Please keep cheering my up. [vs. Please cheer me on.] Have a nice day.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-How do you break the ice with a client?Answer this question in as much detail as you can. You may provide a dialogue if necessary.Relate your experiences, too.Actually, I haven\'t often met client yet becasue I am not a business man yet.>>Correct [one word: businessman]But, I can explain about the way to deal with a cleint because I have seen very many times that my father dealt with many clients. >>Correct [spelling check: client]My father can deal with his clients wisely, It is just smiling in front of the clients while he deal with clients. >>My father can deal with his clients wisely. He just smiles in front of the clients while he deals with them.I think it is very effective skill becasue common people can\'t be angry or saying \"no thank you\" in this situation. >>I think it is very effective because common people can\'t be angry or won\'t say, \"No, thank you\" in this situation.So sometimes, my father make a good results because of the way.^^ >>So sometimes my father makes good results because of his ways. >>So sometimes, my father makes a good result because of this. >>So sometimes, my father arrives at good results through this way.

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