Hi there^^

2015-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I want know that you feel good.^^ Actually, I was so busy today, beacuse I needed to prepare some papers that my father is going to use at a court. Because, the law suit between my father and staff is not finished. Anyway, I am sorry that I couldn't answer your asking..^^;; have a good night.^^ -Homework for today- Who is the brain in your family? Why do you say so? I think my father is the brain among my family but sometimes, he is so impetuous. So sometimes, I annoy and embarrass me.ㅠㅠ;

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I feel kind of great today. How about you Kirk? Please don\'t tell me that you feel exhausted again. Oh no, you won\'t recover fast if you will strain yourself. Find time to take a nap. Let\'s pray that your father will be acquitted. Just bear with it my friend. You\'re the one who can help him more than anyone else. Yes, your father can be impetuous sometimes but who isn\'t? Actually, we all have our own share of moments where we are a bit impetuous. This must be part of being human. Thank you for letting your thoughts be known again by posting this composition on the board. Stay safe Kirk! Get well soon!!! _Klein I want know that you feel good.^^ >>I want to know if you feel good or not. >>I want to hear that you feel good.Actually, I was so busy today, beacuse I needed to prepare some papers that my father is going to use at a court. >>Correct OR >>Actually, I was so busy today because I needed to prepare some papers that my father is going to use in court.Because, the law suit between my father and staff is not finished. >>CorrectAnyway, I am sorry that I couldn\'t answer your asking..^^;; >>Anyway, I am sorry that I couldn\'t answer your question.have a good night.^^>>Correct! OR >> Have a good night.-Homework for today-Who is the brain in your family? Why do you say so?I think my father is the brain among my family but sometimes, he is so impetuous. >>I think my father is the brain in my family but sometimes he is so impetuous.So sometimes, I annoy and embarrass me.ㅠㅠ; >>So sometimes, I am annoyed and it embarrasses me.

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