Hi there^6^~~
학생이 쓴 원문
How about your today.^^
(If i can use a little emoticon, i can make a sentense's last more funny like yours...^^;;)
And Klein!
I haven't konwn stuff that there is the Monthly Report.;;
But, now i get this letter for me.^^
During a day, i will read these letters. i will!
But, I just read a little bit about your advice for the month.
(Or-> However, I just read that you wrote down the letter for me.)
But, now i am trying to read and comprehend.
Please wait for me, while i read this almost all things.^^
-Homework for today-
Hm...
I had known a genius friend when i go to the highschool.
I had a good brain and memory and judgment.
Finally, I had read very many books and newspapers.(Of course. I don't know his recent life.^^)
I remembered that he have very many informations in his brain.
Anyway, he is a wonder and best savvy man around of me in all my life.^^
Too bad now I can't remember his name...
P.S
Klein. I sometimes eat something light in my room.^^
I like it~~.^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Kirk!
I had a long Tuesday.
There are so many \"eggs\" in front of me.
Well, Kirk, these emoticons really aid in conveying my real emotions to you. Too bad they aren\'t available on your page.
At least you can still use the regular ones like ^.^, ^^;; and the like.
I\'m just surprised because I\'ve been sending Monthly Reports to you. I have already sent four, so read them all and tell me what you think about each of them. I really like the most recent one because I shared a poem with you about \"Second Language\".
How I hope it will inspire you just like how that person who you think is a savvy influenced you or even better.
I\'m just wondering; how come you forgot his name? You can answer this question of mine later, Kirk.
And before I say goodbye, I just want to say that I love munching on something in my room as well, most especially when I am working on something like a report or something else.
I guess eating is one of our hobbies!
I will catch you later Kirk!
_Klein
How about your today.^^
>>How about your day today?(If i can use a little emoticon, i can make a sentense\'s last more funny like yours...^^;;)>>If I can use a few emoticons to end my sentences, I can make them look funnier like yours.And Klein!I haven\'t konwn stuff that there is the Monthly Report.;;>>And Klein, I didn\'t know that there is a Monthly Report.But, now i get this letter for me.^^>>But now, I got the letter for me.During a day, i will read these letters. i will!>>During the day, I will read these letters, I will!But, I just read a little bit about your advice for the month.
>>Correct
OR >> I have just read a part of your advice for the most recent month.(Or-> However, I just read that you wrote down the letter for me.)>>However, I just read the letter that you wrote down for me.But, now i am trying to read and comprehend.>>But now, I am trying to read and comprehend everything.Please wait for me, while i read this almost all things.^^>>Please wait for me while I read almost all these things.-Homework for today-Hm...I had known a genius friend when i go to the highschool.>>I had known a genius friend when I went to highschool.I had a good brain and memory and judgment.>>Correct
OR >> I had a sharp memory and good judgment.Finally, I had read very many books and newspapers.(Of course. I don\'t know his recent life.^^)>>Correct!I remembered that he have very many informations in his brain.>>I remembered that he have much information in his brain.Anyway, he is a wonder and best savvy man around of me in all my life.^^>>Anyway, he is a wonder and best savvy man in my life.Too bad now I can\'t remember his name...>>CorrectP.SKlein. I sometimes eat something light in my room.^^
>>Correct
OR >> Klein, sometimes I eat something light in my room.I like it~~.^^
>>CORRECT!
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