Hi there!

2011-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi:) I'm in seoul and I'm taking a rest well so,I'm now recharging. But I'm sorry for today. I didn't answer your call because I lost my cellphone yesterday. I found my phone at a lost property office in subway station today. We can talk after 3days. I'm sad. Did you enjoy your day? Were you busy today? But, Golden holiday will be wait you. What will you do during your holiday? Regardless what you do, I hope that makes you happy. I'm visiting here and there in Seoul. I'm trying to be not looked countrified. Just kidding :) I looked on famous streets in Insa-dong, Seoul. I was able to see antiques and artworks. I recommend that street if you go back Korea. Anyways, I hope you have good memories during your holiday:) Bye! See you again next monday!

강사 첨삭

 Hi there! I am very happy to know that you are having a great time resting. Sometimes, our bodies really need to have a break from all the things we do. I am happy to know as well that you were able to look for your mobile phone. Anyway, I’ll see you again n Monday! Take care. Thanks! -T. Venus Hi:) >> Hi. >> Hi!I'm in seoul and I'm taking a rest well so,I'm now recharging. >> I'm in Seoul and I'm taking a rest well, so I'm now recharging.But I'm sorry for today. >> By the way, I’m sorry for what happened today.I didn't answer your call because I lost my cellphone yesterday.>> I didn't answer your call because I lost my cell phone yesterday.I found my phone at a lost property office in subway station today. >> I found my phone at a lost property office in the subway station today.We can talk after 3days. >> Correct. >> We’ll be talking after 3 days. I'm sad. >> Correct.Did you enjoy your day? >> Correct.Were you busy today? >> Correct.But, Golden holiday will be wait you. >> But don’t worry because the holiday awaits you.What will you do during your holiday? >> Correct.Regardless what you do, I hope that makes you happy. >> Regardless of what you will do, I hope that it’ll make you happy.I'm visiting here and there in Seoul. >> I’m going back and forth here in Seoul.I'm trying to be not looked countrified. >> I’m trying not to look very nationalistic.Just kidding :) >> Just kidding. I looked on famous streets in Insa-dong, Seoul. >> I looked for some famous streets in Insa-dong, Seoul.I was able to see antiques and artworks. >> Correct.I recommend that street if you go back Korea. >> I recommend this place for you to visit if you come back here in Korea.Anyways, I hope you have good memories during your holiday:) >> Anyway, I hope that you will have great memories on your holiday.Bye! See you again next monday! >> Bye! See you again next Monday!

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