Hi there^^

2015-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Answer the following questions in as much detail as you can. What are you reveling in today? Are you likely to blab about it? Sometimes, I think it is very reveling that I enjoy some of good dishes, because I don't have any activities better than to have new dishes.^^ It is most luxurious thing for me.^^ Kkkk hahaha....(So, sorry..;;) Anyway, I like it.^^ And another thing that I think reveling is trying new activities.^^ Actually, even if I think again about revelings, to try new things are most luxurious stuffs.^^ P.S Please check these things.~ 1.The worst scenario is that I have like these snacks everyday. 2."It may sound ridiculous to some, but it works!" - In this sentence, We must use "ridiculously"? because, "ridiculous" is adjective...? 3. Last, It is not a matter to talk with you.LOL Have a nice afternoon.^,~

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Don\'t be too shy now, my friend. Honestly, I love eating too. Let\'s pig out some time! There are a lot of good foods that I want you to try here. I know that there must be a lot of good foods that I can try there in your place. Let\'s exchange places for a while!  Your mom is such a good cook, so I\'ll gain weight for sure. Let\'s simply revel in even the smallest things. And as for your question below, \"ridiculous\" is the right word because it is describing the sound of something, which is the use of adjectives. I\'ll catch you again on the next board, Kirk! _Klein Answer the following questions in as much detail as you can.What are you reveling in today?Are you likely to blab about it?Sometimes, I think it is very reveling that I enjoy some of good dishes, because I don\'t have any activities better than to have new dishes.^^>>Sometimes, I think I revel in some good dishes, because I don\'t have any activities better than to have new dishes. >>Sometimes, I think I revel in some good dishes because I don\'t have anything better to do than to have a taste of new dishes.It is most luxurious thing for me.^^ Kkkk hahaha....(So, sorry..;;)>>It is the most luxurious thing for me.Anyway, I like it.^^>>CorrectAnd another thing that I think reveling is trying new activities.^^>>And another thing that I revel in is trying new activities.Actually, even if I think again about revelings, to try new things are most luxurious stuffs.^^>>Actually, even if I think about reveling in something again, trying new things is the most luxurious stuff.P.SPlease check these things.~>>Correct1.The worst scenario is that I have like these snacks everyday.>>The worst scenario is that I have these snacks every day. >>The worst scenario is that I have snacks such as these every day.2.\"It may sound ridiculous to some, but it works!\" - >>Correct! In this sentence, We must use \"ridiculously\"? because, \"ridiculous\" is adjective...?>>In this sentence, must we use \"ridiculously\" because \"ridiculous\" is an adjective?3. Last, It is not a matter to talk with you.LOL>>Last, it is not a matter of talking with you.Have a nice afternoon.^,~ >>Correct

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