Hi there^^
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How would you live your life if you were an upstart?
Are you likely to blow it and go back from where you came from?
Answer these questions in as much detail as you can.
Actually, I am nothing that is become a upstart because I haven't enhanced some skill to earn money.
But, Now is different because My values is changed.
So, I cann't predict how can I succeed to business, but I can get better possibilities to earn money.^^
Of course, The future is not fixed.^^
강사 첨삭
That is the spirit, Kirk!
Now you are taking every thing lightly. Besides, I really think that you are continuously enhancing your skills. Please do not get tired from doing do because it is for your own good.
A better and brighter future surely awaits you!!
Now I\'m thinking of mine. I better think about it deeply in solitude.
Thanks for today, my dear.
Keep safe!
_Klein
How would you live your life if you were an upstart?Are you likely to blow it and go back from where you came from?Answer these questions in as much detail as you can.Actually, I am nothing that is become a upstart because I haven\'t enhanced some skill to earn money.>>Actually, I was nothing and had nothing to become an upstart because I haven\'t enhanced some skills to earn money.But, Now is different because My values is changed.>>But now is different because my values are changed.
>> But, now is different for my values are changed.So, I cann\'t predict how can I succeed to business, but I can get better possibilities to earn money.^^>>So, I cannot predict how I can succeed in my business, but I can get better possibilities to earn money.
>>So, I cannot predict how I can succeed in my business, but I can get a higher possibility to earn money.Of course, The future is not fixed.^^
>>Correct!
OR >> Of course, the future is not fixed. [capitalization]
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