Hi there.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Didn't you forget to eat lunch today dear?
Please eat good foods as many choose as you can.
And I hope you have a great day for you every moment.^^
-Homework for today-
Answer the following questions briefly.
Which of the things you have is a gimcrack?
Does it make you feel like a big shot?
I don't have any idea for this subject because you asked me this question suddenly.^^
Actually, I don't have any items that is make me a big guy.
I have just a memory that make me a big guy. It is a memory that I stood on the stage to sing first time.^^
I can't forget it and It is a good memory that make me a big guy(shot?).^^
How about you?^^
강사 첨삭
Now I really want to see you sing on any stage there is!
But of course, before that, let\'s eat good food.
Thank you so much for always wishing me well. I hope for the best to come your way.
You are such a big shot, so you better take care.
When will catch you on the board again? Maybe later. Thanks for completing your homework.
Enjoy writing Kirk and may you find the recommendations below useful.
See you!
_Klein
Didn\'t you forget to eat lunch today dear?
>>CorrectPlease eat good foods as many choose as you can.>>Please choose to eat as many good foods as you can.And I hope you have a great day for you every moment.^^>>And I hope you have a great day every moment.
>>And every moment, I hope for a great day for you.-Homework for today-Answer the following questions briefly.Which of the things you have is a gimcrack?Does it make you feel like a big shot?I don\'t have any idea for this subject because you asked me this question suddenly.^^>>CorrectActually, I don\'t have any items that is make me a big guy.>>Actually, I don\'t have any item that makes me a big guy.I have just a memory that make me a big guy. >>I just have a memory that makes me a big guy.
It is a memory that I stood on the stage to sing first time.^^>>It is my memory of standing on the stage, singing for the first time.I can\'t forget it and It is a good memory that make me a big guy(shot?).^^>>I won\'t forget it for it is a good memory that makes me a big guy or big shot.How about you?^^
>>Correct
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