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2011-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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I took a nap because I was very tried today. I worked too hard these days. I was sad that I wasn't able to answer your call. Anyway I'll pick up the phone tomorrow. It is already Thursday. Oh, time is flying. I'm going to study English conversation now. So,I'll watch the American animation and writing my answer about the lesson tomorrow. I like watching the animation "The simpsom" Do you know that? It is very funny and I think that cartoon have satirical wit. Anyway, let us talk about our favorite sport. I'll see you tomorrow. Enjoy your night and sweet dreams dear :)

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thanks for dropping by. Your sentences are almost all correct. Good job! Keep it up always.

Enjoy the rest of your day my dear! Take care.

T. Kelly 

I took a nap because I was very tried today.

>> I took a nap because I was very tired today.
I worked too hard these days.

>>correct
I was sad that I wasn't able to answer your call.

>>correct
Anyway I'll pick up the phone tomorrow.

>> Anyway, I'll pick up the phone tomorrow.
It is already Thursday. Oh, time is flying.

>> It is already Thursday. Oh, time really flies.
I'm going to study English conversation now.

>>correct
So,I'll watch the American animation and writing my answer about the lesson tomorrow.

>> So, I'll watch the American animation and write my answer for our lesson tomorrow.
I like watching the animation "The simpsom"

>>correct
Do you know that?

>>correct
It is very funny and I think that cartoon have satirical wit.

>> It is very funny and I think that cartoon has satirical wit.
Anyway, let us talk about our favorite sport.

>>correct
I'll see you tomorrow.

>>correct
Enjoy your night and sweet dreams dear :)

>>correct

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