Hi there.^^

2015-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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At first, hopefully, I want you are not a woman who think men are beyond help. I am not a man like that..ㅠㅠ; -Homework for today- Would you believe someone saying that nonnative speakers of English trying to communicate with it are beyond help? Defend your answer. Honestly, I might not be agree with the opinion above. Because, pronunciation and diction are most important things for communication. But, If someome cannot speak English like foreigners, it doesn't signify they can not communicate with the others. Of course, sometime, some listeners may not understand thier speaking, but If the listeners understand their intentions both of them can have good communication.^^ Forexample, Mr. [Name] who is the UN secretary general doesn't have good pronunciation to speak English, but he doesn't have any problems to accomplish his tasks.^^

강사 첨삭

You hit another mark here, Kirk.

You sure are not beyond help. I am so blessed to have you. Thank you very much for sharing your ideas with me. Never get tired of doing so, my friend.

Is Mr. [Name] one of the people you look up to? Perhaps, we can talk more about him tomorrow. How does that sound?

I will call you then, so please wait for it.

For now, have a good rest and do not eat too much. We don\'t want to gain too much weight, right?

Catch you tomorrow!

_Klein

At first, hopefully, I want you are not a woman who think men are beyond help.

>>First, hopefully, you are not a woman who thinks men are beyond help.
I am not a man like that..ㅠㅠ;
>>Correct

OR >> I am not that man.
-Homework for today-
Would you believe someone saying that nonnative speakers of English trying to communicate with it are beyond help?
Defend your answer.
Honestly, I might not be agree with the opinion above.

>>Honestly, I might not agree with the opinion above.
Because, pronunciation and diction are most important things for communication.
>>Because, pronunciation and diction are the most important things in communication.
But, If someome cannot speak English like foreigners, it doesn\'t signify they can not communicate with the others.
>>Correct [spelling check: someone]
Of course, sometime, some listeners may not understand thier speaking, but If the listeners understand their intentions both of them can have good communication.^^
>>Of course, sometimes, some listeners may not understand how they speak, but if the listeners understand their intentions both of them can have a good communication.
Forexample, Mr. [Name] who is the UN secretary general doesn\'t have good pronunciation to speak English, but he doesn\'t have any problems to accomplish his tasks.^^

>>For example, Mr. [Name], who is the UN secretary general, doesn\'t have good English pronunciation but he doesn\'t have any problems in accomplishing his tasks.

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