Hi there^^

2015-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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-Homework for today- List all the food that you can wolf down when you are depressed. LOL Let's eat them together. ^.^ Honestly, I have been waiting that I talk about eating with you until now.LOL! I have very many foods that I want to eat.^^ It is a special La-Men that is sold from special restaurant. The restaurant is located on Mapo-Gu. A Name of the restaurant is La Men Truck.^^ If you are going to visit to Korea, I might buy the La-Men. If we will go there, I don't need to agonize to order any menu because the restaurant has just a menu.^^ Fanally, I can tell you about eating, but I can not eat some sweat and delicious stuffs with you because I am reducing my weight.ㅠㅠ;;

강사 첨삭

I LOVE FOOD! But of course, Kirk, we should not consume much because it will negatively affect our whole being. Let\'s just eat something light like La-Men, so you won\'t blame me if you would gain much weight. LOL I\'m just teasing you, Kirk. Please do not be so serious. If you come here, I will also treat you. You better prepare yourself because they are a lot of stuff that I want you to try, especially the one that you don\'t feel like eating - balut.  I am teasing you again. But for real, it will be my treat. I am not so sure when I can go there. It\'s tough. Nonetheless, let us not lose hope. I will catch you then, Kirk! Thank you so much for today. _Klein -Homework for today-List all the food that you can wolf down when you are depressed. LOLLet\'s eat them together. ^.^Honestly, I have been waiting that I talk about eating with you until now.LOL! >>Honestly, I have been waiting to talk about eating with you until now.I have very many foods that I want to eat.^^ >>There are very many foods that I want to eat. >>There are many kinds of food that I want to eat.It is a special La-Men that is sold from special restaurant. >>It is a special La-Men that is sold in a special restaurant.The restaurant is located on Mapo-Gu. >>The restaurant is located in Mapo-Gu.A Name of the restaurant is La Men Truck.^^ >>The name of the restaurant is La Men Truck.If you are going to visit to Korea, I might buy the La-Men. >>If you are going to visit Korea, I might buy you a La-Men.If we will go there, I don\'t need to agonize to order any menu because the restaurant has just a menu.^^>>If we will go there, I won\'t agonize over ordering because there is only one menu in that restaurant.Fanally, I can tell you about eating, but I can not eat some sweat and delicious stuffs with you because I am reducing my weight.ㅠㅠ;; >>Finally, I can tell you about eating but I cannot eat some sweet and delicious stuff with you because I am reducing my weight.

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