Hi there^^

2015-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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The wether of Korea was so cloudy today. So, I felt ................ very nice! Because, I love groomy day.~Hhhh ^^~ It is just a joke.^^ Anyway, I think the world climate is changing now. Honestly, winter rain is not good for my country. In the case, the temperature is going down.ㅠㅠ I don't like cold weather. -Homework for today- Cut to the Chase What do you want to change in our class set-up? Make a list, if needed. Honestly, I am satisfied with our lesson type. Especialy, It is good for me that we can have time to watch each other, so I can learn better through the watching your face and gestures. Just, I want to record our call.^^ Never mind dear!^^ I am satisfied. Just, Do your best for me PLZ.^^ Have a good night.^^ From Kirk~ P.S : I might find good way to memorize contents of our daily class.^^

강사 첨삭

Stay warm, Kirk! Do not catch a cold. Now that sounds like an order. Stay safe no matter what, so you can attend all of our classes and you can do all of the homework that I\'m assigning to you. I will do my best to make each class of ours worthwhile. Thank you for your kind words, my friend. I hope you can download \"PAMELA FOR SKYPE\", so you can record 15 minutes of our class for free. Keep me posted, Kirk! Enjoy your weekend and have a good rest. _Klein The wether of Korea was so cloudy today. >>The weather in Korea is so cloudy today.So, I felt very nice! Because, I love groomy day.~Hhhh ^^~ >>So, I felt very nice because I love gloomy days.It is just a joke.^^ >>CorrectAnyway, I think the world climate is changing now. Honestly, winter rain is not good for my country. >>CorrectIn the case, the temperature is going down.ㅠㅠ >>In that case, the temperature is going down.I don\'t like cold weather.>>I don\'t like the cold weather.-Homework for today-Cut to the ChaseWhat do you want to change in our class set-up?Make a list, if needed.Honestly, I am satisfied with our lesson type.>>Correct OR >> Honestly, I am satisfied with our class type. Especialy, It is good for me that we can have time to watch each other, so I can learn better through the watching your face and gestures.>>It is especially good for me where we can have time to see each other, so I can learn better through looking at your face and watching your gestures. Just, I want to record our call.^^>>I just want to record our call.Never mind dear!^^ I am satisfied.>>CorrectJust, Do your best for me PLZ.^^>>Just do your best for me, please.Have a good night.^^From Kirk~>>Correct P.S : I might find good way to memorize contents of our daily class.^^ >>P.S. I might find a good way to memorize the contents of our daily class.

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