Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Greeting my dear.^^
How did you have your weekend.^^
I want you to have better days than past at all times.^^
And I empathize with your thinking, but I have a long way to go to speak and listen English exactly.
So, I know that I need to have more effort.^^
PLZ Help me~~!!
Have a good night.!
-Homework for today-
What are the things thatrecently dawned on you?
How do you feel about them?
It is a situation to be dawned on me that is "love is not forever!!"
Of course, I was not hurt!! hahaha^^
강사 첨삭
Greetings!
I had a peaceful weekend. I just stayed home, had a movie marathon, ate a lot, wrote something, and slept much.
Tell me about yours later! I will call you then and we can talk more about the situation that dawned on you that \"love is not forever\", because I kind of beg to differ.
I\'ll call you in a while, Kirk.
Until then!
_Klein
Greeting my dear.^^
>>Greetings, my dear.How did you have your weekend.^^
>>How did you spend your weekend?
>>How was your weekend?I want you to have better days than past at all times.^^>>I want you to have better days than the past at all times.
And I empathize with your thinking, but I have a long way to go to speak and listen English exactly.>>Correct
OR >> And I empathize with your thinking, but I have a long way to go before I could use English perfectly.
So, I know that I need to have more effort.^^>>Correct
OR >> So I know that I need to exert much effort/more efforts.
PLZ Help me~~!!>>Correct
OR >> Please help me.
Have a good night.!>>Correct-Homework for today-What are the things thatrecently dawned on you?
>>Correct but spacing [that recently]How do you feel about them?It is a situation to be dawned on me that is \"love is not forever!!\">>The situation that dawned on me is that \"love is not forever\".
Of course, I was not hurt!! hahaha^^
>>Correct
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