Hi there^^

2015-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Greeting my dear.^^ How did you have your weekend.^^ I want you to have better days than past at all times.^^ And I empathize with your thinking, but I have a long way to go to speak and listen English exactly. So, I know that I need to have more effort.^^ PLZ Help me~~!! Have a good night.! -Homework for today- What are the things thatrecently dawned on you? How do you feel about them? It is a situation to be dawned on me that is "love is not forever!!" Of course, I was not hurt!! hahaha^^

강사 첨삭

Greetings! I had a peaceful weekend. I just stayed home, had a movie marathon, ate a lot, wrote something, and slept much. Tell me about yours later! I will call you then and we can talk more about the situation that dawned on you that \"love is not forever\", because I kind of beg to differ. I\'ll call you in a while, Kirk. Until then! _Klein Greeting my dear.^^ >>Greetings, my dear.How did you have your weekend.^^ >>How did you spend your weekend? >>How was your weekend?I want you to have better days than past at all times.^^>>I want you to have better days than the past at all times. And I empathize with your thinking, but I have a long way to go to speak and listen English exactly.>>Correct OR >> And I empathize with your thinking, but I have a long way to go before I could use English perfectly. So, I know that I need to have more effort.^^>>Correct OR >> So I know that I need to exert much effort/more efforts. PLZ Help me~~!!>>Correct OR >> Please help me. Have a good night.!>>Correct-Homework for today-What are the things thatrecently dawned on you? >>Correct but spacing [that recently]How do you feel about them?It is a situation to be dawned on me that is \"love is not forever!!\">>The situation that dawned on me is that \"love is not forever\". Of course, I was not hurt!! hahaha^^ >>Correct

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