Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening dear.^^
How did you spend your evening?
Today, I wisit to court of law because a X-staff that I was metioned long time ago.
So, I am a little groomy, because I did listen to a good new from my judicial advicer.
So, I forecast that the legal fight may hold out.
Honestly, I want that the fight will be finished quickly.
PLZ, Include in your prayer to me.
-Homework for today-
If you can change your appearance, who would you like to be your spitting image?
Explain your choice.
If I will be able to change my face, I want to take after my father.^^
Even if, I may be born again...^^
강사 첨삭
Alas, Kirk. The claim of your previous staff must be so strong that makes it difficult for you to win the case so soon. It will take time but let up hope and pray for positive results. You and your family are always in my prayers, my friend. You have done your part, so leave the rest to Him.
I want to thank you for being so open to me. Always take good care of yourself. Smile now for you won\'t look younger than your father if you would frown. Honestly, your father looks good. No wonder you want him to be your spitting image. Nonetheless, you look great already, so there\'s no need for you to wish for that.
Stay safe!
Best Regards,
_Klein
Good evening dear.^^How did you spend your evening?>>CorrectToday, I wisit to court of law because a X-staff that I was metioned long time ago.
>>Today, I visited the court of law because of our previous staff who I mentioned long time ago.So, I am a little groomy, because I did listen to a good new from my judicial advicer.
>>So, I am a little gloomy, because I did not hear good news from my judicial adviser.So, I forecast that the legal fight may hold out.
>>CorrectHonestly, I want that the fight will be finished quickly.>>Correct
OR >> Honestly, I want this to be over soon.PLZ, Include in your prayer to me.>>Please include this in your prayers.-Homework for today-If you can change your appearance, who would you like to be your spitting image?Explain your choice.If I will be able to change my face, I want to take after my father.^^Even if, I may be born again...^^
>>Correct
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