Hi there.^^

2015-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I am sorry dear because I haven't read your all feedbacks for today yet.. Because, I have to go outside now.;; After going out side, I might accomplish to read all your feedbacks.^^;; Have a good night.^^ -Homework for today- What would you do if you were asked to do a project with a bird brain? Answer the question in as much detail as you can. Hm..... I think such question is the most difficult question to answer...;; Actually, If I will be in the situations, I may not begin to try this project.;; If I have started the project.......... I may not stop to accomplish the project..;;

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Please loosen up, Kirk. You may read the feedback anytime. NO PRESSURE! I will just wait for your composition/s patiently. Go out more often with your friends. Speak English with them, and enjoy every minute you\'re together. When you are asked to do a project with a bird brain, well, you would definitely manage. It may take a toll at first, but I know that there\'s got to be a way to get through it. May you find the recommendations below useful, my friend. Take it easy and keep safe! Until we see each other again. _Klein I am sorry dear because I haven\'t read your all feedbacks for today yet.. >>I am sorry dear because I haven\'t read all your feedbacks for today yet.Because, I have to go outside now.;; >>This is because I have to go outside now. [I\'m sorry dear that I haven\'t read the feedback for today yet because I have to go out now.]After going out side, I might accomplish to read all your feedbacks.^^;; >>After it, I might accomplish reading all your feedbacks.Have a good night.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-What would you do if you were asked to do a project with a bird brain?Answer the question in as much detail as you can.I think such question is the most difficult question to answer.>>CorrectActually, If I will be in the situations, I may not begin to try this project.>>Actually, if I will be in these situations, I may not begin to try this project. >>Actually, if I will be in this situation, I may not begin with this project.If I have started the project.. I may not stop to accomplish the project. >>Correct

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