Hi there.^^

2015-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Klein~ My plan to go to Pusan for tomorrow was cancered this day evening...;; Actually, I postponed our class for tomorrow because of my schedule for tomorrow. But, now I am regretting to postpone the class. Anyway, Don't be afraid and never mind about this because we will meet again on friday this week.^^ See you that day.^^ Good night~!! -Homework for today- Who has recently made you blow up? If you do not mind, relate what happened. Honestly, A few month ago, I had been blowed up by my father. Of course, like those situations are happenning now but it are improved a little. Anyway, Why I feel to blow up is that my father doesn't have good communication skills with other people or me. So, sometime I feel heavy beacuse of my father.^^;;

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Kirk! It\'s really unfortunate that you postponed your class today, and your appointment today that made you do it was canceled, but look on the bright side - you can get to rest. I promise not to disturb you but I hope you can check this reply of mine to your composition later. You are probably reading this now. I hope that your father won\'t make you blow up this time or even some other people. Keep a cool head, Kirk! Share the good vibes to the people around you. Flash a bright smile!  Keep safe, my friend. Catch you tomorrow! _Klein Klein~ My plan to go to Pusan for tomorrow was cancered this day evening..;;>>Klein, my plan to go to Pusan tomorrow is canceled this evening.Actually, I postponed our class for tomorrow because of my schedule for tomorrow.>>Correct OR >> Actually, I postponed our class for tomorrow for this supposed schedule.But, now I am regretting to postpone the class.>>But now, I am regretting postponing the class. >>But now, I regret that I postponed the class.Anyway, Don\'t be afraid and never mind about this because we will meet again on friday this week.^^>>Correct [capitalization: Anyway, don\'t be afraid and never mind about this because we will meet again on Friday this week. >>Anyway, don\'t be anxious for we will meet again on Friday this week.]See you that day.^^>>See you on that day.Good night~!!>>Correct-Homework for today-Who has recently made you blow up?If you do not mind, relate what happened.Honestly, A few month ago, I had been blowed up by my father.>>Honestly, a few months ago, I had been blown up by my father.Of course, like those situations are happenning now but it are improved a little.>>Of course, situations like those are happening now but they have improved a little.Anyway, Why I feel to blow up is that my father doesn\'t have good communication skills with other people or me.>>Anyway, why I feel that my father blows me up is he doesn\'t have good communication skills with other people, including me.So, sometime I feel heavy beacuse of my father.^^;; >>So sometimes, I feel heavy because of my father.

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