Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Greeting my dear.^^
How was your day?
I have had a day to be busy.^^
Anyway, To live a busy life is wonderful to everyone because to be busy mean a person is alive.^^
Cheer up my dear.
If you cheer up yourself, I will do same with you.^^
Good night.^^
-HOMEWORK [Monday]-
In what aspect are you second to none?
Explain your answer in detail.
I think I have a good skill that I am second to none, It precisely is choir conducting skill.^^
It is my best weapon, Isn't it?
강사 첨삭
Greetings, Kirk!
Have you had another busy day? Perhaps, it\'s not yet over. Well, embrace it and feel more alive than ever.
Also, enhance your conducting skills more so it would really stand out and by that time, you\'ll be quite sure that it is second to none.
May you continue to have a wonderful day, Kirk.
Keep safe!
_Klein
Greeting my dear.^^
>>Greetings, my dear.How was your day?
>>CorrectI have had a day to be busy.^^
>>I have had a busy day.Anyway, To live a busy life is wonderful to everyone because to be busy mean a person is alive.^^
>>Anyway, to live a busy life is wonderful to everyone, because to be busy means to be alive.Cheer up my dear.
If you cheer up yourself, I will do same with you.^^
Good night.^^>>Correct-HOMEWORK [Monday]-In what aspect are you second to none?Explain your answer in detail.I think I have a good skill that I am second to none, It precisely is choir conducting skill.^^>>I think my skill that is second to none is precisely conducting a choir.It is my best weapon, Isn\'t it?
>>Correct!
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