Hi there~
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강사 첨삭
How\'s your day, so far, Kirk?
I am glad my question made you reflect on how you are living your life. I think your job at your father\'s company is a form of training. You will then be so much better at managing your own company after some time and you won\'t feel like an excess baggage or something.
I have to commend you for making sense of this idiom, my friend. Thanks a lot for studying hard. You have also used some great words here and my favorite is \"quagmire\".
Enjoy your day off and I\'ll just catch you again next week.
Keep safe, Kirk!
_Klein
Is your question when I felt that I am like an unnecessary person?
>>Correct
OR >> Is your question about when I felt that I am like an unnecessary person?
If is it right, My answer is \"yes\".
Honestly, I feel like this until now.
>>Correct
Because, I am working something in my father\'s company, but I cant do some creative work my self.
>>Because, I am working on something in my father\'s company but I can\'t do some creative work myself.
Actually, I have said my huge dream, but I\'m still wondering in aquagmire...
>>Correct [a quagmire]
I don\'t have any adea what can I do for my way...
>>I don\'t have any idea what I can do for my way.
It is not mean that I don\'t be passionate.
>>It does not mean that I cannot be passionate.
But I afraid that I may become a fibber.
>>But I\'m afraid that I may become a fibber.
Nobady have any attetion for this, I am worry that I may deceive myself.
>>Nobody has any attention for this, so I am worried that I may deceive myself.
Haha.^^ It is so funny...
>>Correct
Anyway, I am thankful that you ask my about this question and your attention to me.
>>Anyway, I am thankful that you asked me this question and for your attention to me.
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