hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, when I was a university student, I vistied to regions many times to sing with my choir members.^^
Honestly, I want to go to regions or other countries to have good performances with my choir member.
But, Time doesn't allow my hope yet.^^
강사 첨삭
Only time can tell, Kirk, so please wait patiently but never stop giving it your best shot in every single thing that you embark in.
\"Do your best and God will do the rest.\" You must have heard this many times.
Thanks for sharing once more, my friend. Though your composition is short today, I can feel the emotion that you tried to enclose in each of your words.
Hang in there!
Keep safe and warm. Let\'s catch up again later.
_Klein
Actually, when I was a university student, I vistied to regions many times to sing with my choir members.^^>>Actually, when I was a university student, I visited regions many times to sing with my choir members.Honestly, I want to go to regions or other countries to have good performances with my choir member.>>Correct [choir member/s]
OR >> Honestly, I want to go to regions or other countries to have good performances with my choir.But, Time doesn\'t allow my hope yet.^^
>>Correct
OR >> But I don\'t think it\'s time for this yet.
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