Hi there.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there and I apologize I could't answer with your asking.^^;;
Anyway, I had got good vacations and to meet my good relatives and friends and today I had been work field since at 7AM. (Today is wendnesday.^^)
So, after the work, I have slept until now..;;
Anyway, among the vacations I have got a good rest.^^
And I hope that you would same with me.^^
Have a good night.^^
From Kirk^^
Do you keep the faith?
Explain your answer in as much detail as you can.
I want to make money for my happy life.
Of course, some people say "Money is not all for your happiness." but I think "if someone have much money, the one can have more chance than usual people."
Of course, thinking is different each people.^^....;;
Anyway, I want to make a much money, and I want to happy with my people to use the momey.^^ (Of course, Including you.^^)
강사 첨삭
Apology accepted. In the first place, there\'s no need for that because your reason is valid. Nonetheless, thank you so much for this sweet gesture of yours.
Our vacation may be over but it does not mean that we won\'t have time to rest. Whenever you can, take a power nap. I\'ll do the same for I don\'t want to exhaust my energy. There are so many things to accomplish but if we do them in haste, we may cause bigger problems, which we should avoid. Let\'s make money, my friend! If I\'m rich enough, I will definitely treat you.
Stay happy, Kirk! Treat life nicely, so it would treat you back nicely.
_Klein
Hi there and I apologize I could\'t answer with your asking.^^;;>>Hi there and I apologize for I couldn\'t answer your question.Anyway, I had got good vacations and to meet my good relatives and friends and today I had been work field since at 7AM. (Today is wendnesday.^^)>>Anyway, I had a good vacation. I met my good relatives and friends, and today I had been at the work field since 7 a.m. Today is Wednesday.>>Anyway, I got a good vacation for I met my good relatives and friends, and today, Wednesday, I had been at the work field since 7 a.m.
So, after the work, I have slept until now..;;>>So, after work, I have slept until now.Anyway, among the vacations I have got a good rest.^^>>CorrectAnd I hope that you would same with me.^^>>And I hope that you did the same with me.Have a good night.^^From Kirk^^>>CorrectDo you keep the faith?Explain your answer in as much detail as you can.I want to make money for my happy life.>>Correct
OR >> I want to make money to have a happy life.Of course, some people say \"Money is not all for your happiness.\" but I think \"if someone have much money, the one can have more chance than usual people.\">>Of course, some people say, \"Money is not all for your happiness,\" but I think if someone has much money, then one can have more chances than usual people.Of course, thinking is different each people.^^....;;>>Of course, this thinking is different from each person.Anyway, I want to make a much money, and I want to happy with my people to use the momey.^^
>>Anyway, I want to make much money and I want to be happy with my people using that money.
(Of course, Including you.^^)
>>Correct!
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