Hi there.^^

2016-02-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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-Homework for today- Who is the most egocentric person you know? Why do you say so? Provide concrete details to explain your answer. I think I am a most energetic guy of the world.^^ But, my worst week is that I can lose much power when I can't not feel why I am doing something, in toher words, A target is most important for me during activities.^^

강사 첨삭

  You sure are energetic, my friend, not egocentric. I bet you were still feeling a bit sleepy when you did your homework. Nonetheless, I appreciate this simple act of yours, finishing your homework. It\'s the thought that counts, my dear. May you find time to check the next feedback and complete the rest of your homework. Take it easy, though. I\'ll catch you again later! Keep safe, Kirk. _Klein -Homework for today-Who is the most egocentric person you know? Why do you say so?Provide concrete details to explain your answer.I think I am a most energetic guy of the world.^^>>I think I am the most energetic guy in the world. [I think I am the most egocentric guy in the world./ I think I am the most egocentric guy on Earth.]But, my worst week is that I can lose much power when I can\'t not feel why I am doing something, in toher words, A target is most important for me during activities.^^ >>Buy my worst week is where I lose so much power when I cannot feel why I am doing something. In other words, a target is most important for me in any activities.

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