Hi there^^
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-HOMEWORK-
What's the most scintillating performance you've seen?
Describe it in detail.
Very lomg time ago, I watched a TVshow and I find a child who play a Drum.
And when I watched It , I shouted "Wow, he is fantastic drummer.".
Because, He played the Drum better than Pro. Drummer.
And do you know why I was amazing much better? Because, He as just nine years old.^^
Is it funny?^^
P,S
Finally, you are not a talkative woman.^^
If you can have time to talk with me, please do this.
It is just my request dear.^^
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Thank you for finding time for your composition-making task, Kirk. I truly appreciate it.
Look at the \"correct\" marks below. These days, many children sure are packed with so much talent. Now I\'m wondering what my hidden talent is. Oh brother, it is hidden, so I am having a hard time discovering it.Thanks for sharing, Kirk!
Honestly speaking, you, yourself, are very talented.
I have seen your video conducting a big choir. That\'s such a nice job, my dear!
I hope to see more of that and if you don\'t mind, I will show it to my friends, especially Jasmine.
Now I think I am being a bit talkative, so I\'ll zip my mouth now, stop encoding and bid you goodbye for now.
I don\'t want to take much of your time. I hope you\'ll have a good rest after a long day at work.
Keep safe!
_Klein
-HOMEWORK-What\'s the most scintillating performance you\'ve seen?Describe it in detail.Very lomg time ago, I watched a TVshow and I find a child who play a Drum.>>Very long time ago, I watched a TV show and found a child playing a drum.And when I watched It , I shouted \"Wow, he is fantastic drummer.\".>>And when I watched it, I shouted, \"Wow, he is a fantastic drummer!\"Because, He played the Drum better than Pro. Drummer.>>This is because he played the drum better than a pro drummer.And do you know why I was amazing much better? Because, He as just nine years old.^^>>And do you know why it was better or more amazing? It\'s because he is just nine years old.Is it funny?^^>>CorrectP,SFinally, you are not a talkative woman.^^If you can have time to talk with me, please do this.It is just my request dear.^^ >>Correct
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