Hi there.^^
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-Homework for today-
Answer the following in your best candor.
When you are able to put your two cents in the discussion, how do you feel?
How about when you don’t?
Honestly, My real personality was bold but now I don't.
So, I touhgt why I can't be bold so I can arrive a goal, it is that had been influenced by my father.
Honestly, when i was young(maybe around 20 years ago) I was a boss among my friends.
So, I had much confidence by my self and I could say to the others of my real ideas.
But! now I don't... Of course it is not only a reason but I think It have influenced me.
Anyway, good thing Is I can tell you my ideas to you now.^^
Thank you always my dear. have a nice day and don't foret to have a good meal.^^
From kirk~~
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This is incredible! You finished your composition quite early today, my friend.
You are also bold with your answer to my question. Thank you for trusting me.
We have to consider these days that at our age, boldness comes in different forms. I guess the kind of boldness that you have is admirable because it can still be controlled. If not, you are then bound to hurt people unconsciously.
Nonetheless, I hope that you will never hold back in sharing whatever comes to your mind. It will be helpful in your practice. Rest assured that I will acknowledge them. Always remember to think and speak English, Kirk.
May you continue to have a nice day!
Thank you for your reminder. Eating sure is one of the things that we should not forget doing. Don\'t skip yours!
Keep me posted, my dear, and stay safe.
_Klein
-Homework for today-Answer the following in your best candor.When you are able to put your two cents in the discussion, how do you feel?How about when you don’t?Honestly, My real personality was bold but now I don\'t.>>Honestly, my real personality was bold but now it isn\'t.
>>Honestly, my real personality was bold but now I am not.
>>Honestly, I used to be bold.So, I touhgt why I can\'t be bold so I can arrive a goal, it is that had been influenced by my father.>>So I thought why I can\'t be bold to arrive at a goal is that I had been influenced by my father.Honestly, when i was young(maybe around 20 years ago) I was a boss among my friends.>>Correct
OR >> Honestly, when I was young, maybe around 20 years ago, I was the boss among my friends.So, I had much confidence by my self and I could say to the others of my real ideas.>> So, I had much self-confidence and I could tell others my real ideas.But! now I don\'t... Of course it is not only a reason but I think It have influenced me.>>But now, I don\'t. Of course, it is not the only reason but I think it has influenced me.Anyway, good thing Is I can tell you my ideas to you now.^^>>Anyway, the good thing is I can tell you my ideas now.Thank you always my dear. have a nice day and don\'t foret to have a good meal.^^>>Correct [capitalization; spelling check: forget]
OR >> Thank you, always, my dear. Have a nice day and don\'t forget to have a good meal.From kirk~~
>>Correct [capitalization: proper noun - Kirk]
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