Hi there.
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-HOMEWORK [Monday]-
How do you keep yourself calm?
List all possible ways and identify the most effective one.
To have resting time without any action or talk.
I think it is best way to calm down my self.^^
How do you calm down yourself.?
강사 첨삭
I thought you\'re going to be too busy today. Thank goodness you found time for your composition-writing task.
This may be short but it\'s good enough. If you write every day, review my replies, and re-write your compositions, then improvement is on its way.
Just stay calm and you\'ll get where you want soon.
Don\'t forget that I am here to help you!
Keep safe, Kirk.
_Klein_
-HOMEWORK [Monday]-How do you keep yourself calm?List all possible ways and identify the most effective one.To have resting time without any action or talk.>>Correct
OR >> To have resting time without any action or conversation.I think it is best way to calm down my self.^^>>I think it is the best way to calm myself down.
>>I think it is the best way for me to calm down.How do you calm down yourself.?
>>How do you calm yourself down?
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